Can my coli brehs and brehette give my song a listen

[Cleansprite]

Been working on music and love hearing feed back and opinions to improve

 

[SnowflakesByTheOZ]

Sounds like you know what you're doing. I fukk with the adlibs, I think it would sound dope with more, to fill the track out. Also the vocals seem louder than the beat so next time pay attention to the mixing. Try adding some compression and delay on the vocals. But the actual rapping is dope breh. Keep going man

 

[Cleansprite]

Sounds like you know what you're doing. I fukk with the adlibs, I think it would sound dope with more, to fill the track out. Also the vocals seem louder than the beat so next time pay attention to the mixing. Try adding some compression and delay on the vocals. But the actual rapping is dope breh. Keep going man

Thanks and after I I posted and listened to it I again hated the mixing .... but I wanna keep progressing every song

 

[SnowflakesByTheOZ]

Thanks and after I I posted and listened to it I again hated the mixing .... but I wanna keep progressing every song

Definitely man, you can listen to the track on different sources like the car, computer/laptop, headphones and adjust to suit.