Akrobatik ft. REKS & Chilla Jones – Reckless Abandon

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Beat is generic

Lyrics are generic

Rhyme patterns are acceptable but since the lyrics are generic its a waste of technique. Some of the lines sound like he just rhymed to make it fit. A tad corny in some parts

Flow is acceptable but sounds a bit cliche in many parts because he struggled to make some of his rhyme patterns fit.

All of this could have been overlooked with a better beat. Shame


Better.
 

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Beat is generic

Lyrics are generic

Rhyme patterns are acceptable but since the lyrics are generic its a waste of technique. Some of the lines sound like he just rhymed to make it fit. A tad corny in some parts

Flow is acceptable but sounds a bit cliche in many parts because he struggled to make some of his rhyme patterns fit.

All of this could have been overlooked with a better beat. Shame


Better.



i was inspecting more from REKS
 

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Yo, why this f@ggot @Gunshi running his tranny loving ass in threads and arbitrarily 1 starring them?
 
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