Anyone willing to review my msc statement of purpose?

[African_brehda]

I’m applying for an i.t management msc in Germany. I’d be really glad if any of you could read through what I’ve written

 

[African_brehda]

@papa surf you used to be a teacher? How can I send you a message? I don’t see the option to start a conversation on your profile.
Shoot me a pm if you’re available to help

 

[old pig]

@papa surf you used to be a teacher? How can I send you a message? I don’t see the option to start a conversation on your profile.
Shoot me a pm if you’re available to help

you can start one now