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Her technical base is outdated but she demonstrates the type of cadence.
That if she up'd her technical base syllable count wise.
She would be far more impressive.

Right now her vocab is boring cause her technical base is limited.
Past that. If she does increase her technical base she has the intangibles to do something noteworthly as a female rapper.


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Her technical base is outdated but she demonstrates the type of cadence.
That if she up'd her technical base syllable count wise.
She would be far more impressive.

Right now her vocab is boring cause her technical base is limited.
Past that. If she does increase her technical base she has the intangibles to do something noteworthly as a female rapper.


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break down to me in english please ill pass it on constructive criticism is appreciated.:ohhh:
 

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break down to me in english please ill pass it on constructive criticism is appreciated.:ohhh:

If she is an emcee she should know the verbiage to understand what I said.
If she does not understand what I said,...then, she should study being an emcee more closely.
As she should have a very advanced understanding of the verbiage used to critique emcees.
She does not sound like a noob rapper.
so this, information found in my critique should be useful as is.


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Art Barr say her flow outdated, I think.

But who cares I like it, it weighs heavy on you
 

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Art Barr say her flow outdated, I think.

But who cares I like it, it weighs heavy on you


Her flow is not outdated.
Her technical base is outdated, and not expansive.
Which is why she is on just old loop bests.
As, she would be offkey on slower bpm's and her technical base would be exposed as severely outdated.


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