Calling All Booth Connoisseurs (Please Critique/ Advise)

[Exiled Martian]

Coli bredrinzzzzz... I need some help yo.... I'm sure half the Coli here produce/make their own music etc So I'm looking for encouragement or straight up 'truth be told' type feedback for my boy P Loco ( Youtube channel )
We basically go wayyy back like high top fades.. used to work retail together back in the dayzzzz (good times in the Foot locker stock rooms doing late night stock takes & kicking free styles whilst messing around with beat making software on the work comps ) Anyways my boy took it one step further with the music & he trying to holla at that Illuminati bread...

can any of you Americanos make it happen for this UK Rap / Production movement Bruddahs?... Jokes aside with the favour call.. But I'd appreciate if ya'll peep some of his music below & basically give a bruddah a straight up critique on what needs improving etc

P.S: please do not derail/ troll this thread & only genuine constructive crticism/ feedback if possible...

Ok so this is alittle freetsyle Video he shot quite a while back, that gets quite a few spins (locally speaking he got some buzz out here)



Go Hard or Go Home (sounds better in a whip)


Sentimental Track....dude can cater for both sides of the rap coin (gimmick & intellect rap)


the usual proverbial Amilli remix everyone did


He also produces... (does alot of bashment/ Rap engagements)


Anyways.... to sum it up Can the Coli Brehs drop their insight on any obstacles, fine tuning (if any needed), angle of approach & possibly give my boy Loco (rapper/ producer) some useful intel to use as he tries to break the UK scene.

Much appreciated & thanking you in advance

 

[Exiled Martian]

Damn threads in The Booth get pushed back mad quick!

Bumping this back for some input!

 

[Exiled Martian]

Bumping the crap outta this thread.... like its Bumpaaaaa Carsssss..... Can someone shed some much needed insight in relation the OP...

 

[King Biko]

I'll listen 2 it and leave feedback when I get off

 

[puppetmaster]

Interesting cat, sounds pretty polished, the British accent is actually beneficial because it gives him a unique sound as I admittedly have not heard much UK hiphop.


Starz Media LLC gave me the

so I couldn't view Go Hard or Go Home

Listened to the Full of myself freestyle, he sounded confident like he believed what he was spitting which is vital.

Listened to Lullaby, this is up my alley i'm a sucker for those type of tracks very ominous sounding beat. ..subject matter was strong, damn good message, song would have a place on a movie trailer or perhaps a Showtime series IMO.



-P-

 

[Beegio]

I'll listen when I get off today. I actually like garage and the UK sound, so should be interesting.

 

[Exiled Martian]

I'll listen 2 it and leave feedback when I get off

Interesting cat, sounds pretty polished, the British accent is actually beneficial because it gives him a unique sound as I admittedly have not heard much UK hiphop.


Starz Media LLC gave me the

so I couldn't view Go Hard or Go Home

Listened to the Full of myself freestyle, he sounded confident like he believed what he was spitting which is vital.

Listened to Lullaby, this is up my alley i'm a sucker for those type of tracks very ominous sounding beat. ..subject matter was strong, damn good message, song would have a place on a movie trailer or perhaps a Showtime series IMO.



-P-

I'll listen when I get off today. I actually like garage and the UK sound, so should be interesting.

Much appreciated Booth bredrinzzz.... in all honesty Rap recognition here is not as RIFE as in America... but we tryna get a movement going... since the very essence of UK RAP is slept upon HARD over here. Yeh you do have your other proverbial genres that do well i.e Grime scene,garage, dubstep, drum & base, house. But In all honesty UK RAP (like proper rap kinda what Loco does) is not yet a maint stream & it is what we are aiming to glorify per se!

Once again feedback is much appreciated... as we can only learn from you guys over the big pond (atlantic ocean ye but sitll you get the slang) on what needs refining /tweaking from a hip hop /rap perspective

 

[King Biko]

The two freestyle were kinda average, nothing that made me say damn he went in or nothing that made me say he's garbage. The second video doesn't play for me I guess cuz I'm in America and the emotional track was good but it felt carried by the beat and hook, I wish I could've felt more emotion in his bars because they were solid on that song

 

[Exiled Martian]

The two freestyle were kinda average, nothing that made me say damn he went in or nothing that made me say he's garbage. The second video doesn't play for me I guess cuz I'm in America and the emotional track was good but it felt carried by the beat and hook, I wish I could've felt more emotion in his bars because they were solid on that song

Props for diverging some of your time & giving me genuine critique on behalf of my boy....I'm currently at work now breh so youtube and other multi media sites are kinda blocked/ off limits... recently we shot a video for one of his more prominent tracks called Space ships...(it was sort of a joint effort collaboration with other local artists) I'll post that up alongside other material tonight!

 

[Exiled Martian]

Spaceship track...basically the most successful video shot track that he managed to conjure! Its obvious this track is not about the bars really simple AB style rhyme scheme just Tryna surf the beat basically!



Different swag aka basically a spin off to that hustle hard track


Ok this has got to be one of his better works...the video concept was crazy as well..we didn't shoot it of course.... but shout out to the editor that hooked it up..tracks called Stallion...that Feature song he did with this next man called J Loso


As always Looking for feedback/ inputs...also if anybody wanna collab / wanna make that overseas music happen we all ears yo!

 

[Exiled Martian]

Fukking around with that auto tune & envy concept