Can I get some feed back on my article?

[Neuromancer]

Off the Page :A black man’s journey into comics

 

[Clay Puppington]

FYI the formatting is messed up a lil that makes it hard 2 read

 

[Turk]

Off the Page :A black man’s journey into comics

The formatting is all the way messed up. Might want to fix that Breh

 

[Hellmont]

Everything looks sloppy Thought it was just my phone till I read that on my computer

 

[StarGirl]

Pay me and I’ll edit that for you.

 

[Neuromancer]

Pay me and I’ll edit that for you.

Nah.

 

[Neuromancer]

Everything looks sloppy Thought it was just my phone till I read that on my computer

The formatting is all the way messed up. Might want to fix that Breh

FYI the formatting is messed up a lil that makes it hard 2 read

Will fix.

 

[StarGirl]

Nah.

Good luck

 

[Neuromancer]

Good luck

Thanks found an editor. One who actually likes black men too.

 

[StarGirl]

Thanks found an editor. One who actually likes black men too.

I don’t know who started that rumor, but I don’t argue foolishness. I know that narrative is sexy to y’all, so I’ll let you guys run with it.

My offer was valid. There’s a lot more wrong than just the formatting.

 

[SnowflakesByTheOZ]

Thanks found an editor. One who actually likes black men too.

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[StarGirl]

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Did you even read his article, you shyt stirrer?

You’re only here for fukkery and not to help.