Check Out My Verse To Prodigy's Eistein Beat (let me know if it's garbage)

[LogicFirst]

struggle bars part II nikkaz, from whozever beat.

https://soundcloud.com/logicfirst/brakes72113


constructive critizism please. Im only two months in the game

 

[LogicFirst]

I need feedback. Im not sensitive

 

[tonyclifton]

Lyrics. 2/10

Flow 4/10

Voice6/10 not bad at all actually

Delivery. 2/10


You got a dope voice just work on having your own personality and sharpen up your bars

 

[LogicFirst]

Lyrics. 2/10

Flow 4/10

Voice6/10 not bad at all actually

Delivery. 2/10


You got a dope voice just work on having your own personality and sharpen up your bars

good lookin. I aint mad at cha

 

[Bugsmoran]

not bad for a cat just starting out... good voice... gotta sharping up on your delivery..

work on your lyrics... its too simple.. start reading the type of books Nas be reading and you'll be aight

do u smoke weed? if not try smoking then writing something...


you remind me of a young Evidence from Dilated Peoples... maybe study his flow to perfect yours

7:10mark

 

[LogicFirst]

Lyrics. 2/10

Flow 4/10

Voice6/10 not bad at all actually

Delivery. 2/10


You got a dope voice just work on having your own personality and sharpen up your bars

You think this other joint here is less lyrical or more lyrical?

https://soundcloud.com/logicfirst/rusty721132

 

[LogicFirst]

not bad for a cat just starting out... good voice... gotta sharping up on your delivery..

work on your lyrics... its too simple.. starting reading the type of books Nas be reading and you'll be aight

do u smoke weed? if not try smoking then writing something...


you remind me of a young Evidence from Dilated Peoples... maybe study his flow to perfect yours

7:10mark

good lookin fam

 

[FaTaL]

struggle bars part II nikkaz, from whozever beat.

https://soundcloud.com/logicfirst/brakes72113


constructive critizism please. Im only two months in the game

keep working on your flow and speed it up a little and make it sound normal

 

[LogicFirst]

keep working on your flow and speed it up a little and make it sound normal

i feel like im listening to a elementary kid

I can dig it. good lookin'

 

[Brofato]

Are you Hispanic? The two months shows. It sounds like you're trying a bit too hard to get to the punchline like one of those dudes who wait for you to laugh at their joke.

I agree about working on the flow and those lyrics.