eminem third verse on till i collapse was ridiculous

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Soon as a verse starts I eat it at MC’s heart
What is he thinking? How not to go against me? Smart.
And it's absurd how people hang on every word.
I’ll probably never get the props I feel I ever deserve
But I’ll never be served my spot is forever reserved


in these 5 lines he rhymes more shyt then anybody

like the first two lines he rhymes starts which rhymes with the word heart at end of the 1st line
then he rhymes eat which rhymes with c's in mc's internally

then he rhymes it which rhymes with thinking in the next line which rhymes with in which rhymes with each other internally but it also rhymes with it in the previous line and inst in against the next line line and also it rhymes with is and that rhymes with everything i just mentioned.

then he rhymes me with which rhymes eat in the previous line but that also rhymes with he in the same line
the he rhymes smart which rhymes with heart in the previous line which rhymes with starts and heart from the previous lines.

then he rhymes and which is pronounced as in not and and that rhymes with it's which rhymes with is and thinking and against from the previous line then he rhymes surd in absurd and that rhymes with word at the
end of the the same line. but ab in absurd rhymes with hang which is a internal rhyme.

and peep rhymes with ree in every.

then he rhymes i'll which rhymes with i in the same line

and prob in probably rhymes with


with props internally which also rhymes with spot in the next line and that also rhymes with props and spot from the previous lines.

and it get's only more crazy after that so.

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Eminem's wordplay is impeccable... my only complain is that his subject on a lot of his songs is hollow, and weak. When he is talking about serious stuff, he does it great... another example, in my opinion, is that joint with Lloyd banks, "where I'm at" where he rhymes greatly about relationships...
 

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Eminem's wordplay is impeccable... my only complain is that his subject on a lot of his songs is hollow, and weak. When he is talking about serious stuff, he does it great... another example, in my opinion, is that joint with Lloyd banks, "where I'm at" where he rhymes greatly about relationships...

the content sometimes leaves alot to be desired.
 

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