For the ones who like lyricism..

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I'm sorry Tony Smith.
You managed to say alot of words without really saying nothing.

You started to mumble towards the end like you was just trying to hurry up and finish becuz you was tired of rapping.

Your voice sounded like you was reading off a paper. I know that wasn't the case but put some personality in your delivery.

Your flow reminded me of Eminem but not in a good way.

Honeatly, I started to get bored the same time you did.

You got potential tho breh. The lyrics is there, the style isn't.
 

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I'm sorry Tony Smith.
You managed to say alot of words without really saying nothing.

You started to mumble towards the end like you was just trying to hurry up and finish becuz you was tired of rapping.

Your voice sounded like you was reading off a paper. I know that wasn't the case but put some personality in your delivery.

Your flow reminded me of Eminem but not in a good way.

Honeatly, I started to get bored the same time you did.

You got potential tho breh. The lyrics is there, the style isn't.
Lmaoo
 

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One thing I've learned hearing people tape their raps on webcams and camera phones is that they always sound 5x wacker recording on a mic over a track :ld: Drop a song for more accurate criticisms, because the low quality stuff hides delivery and voice issues
 

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One thing I've learned hearing people tape their raps on webcams and camera phones is that they always sound 5x wacker recording on a mic over a track :ld: Drop a song for more accurate criticisms, because the low quality stuff hides delivery and voice issues
 
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