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[Kisame]

CHECK IT OUT TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK I APPRECIATE ALL FEEDBACK!!!!

 

[8====D]

this rap shıt aint for everybody nice beat though.

 

[SleezyBigSlim]

I can fucc with this

 

[KXIVN]

 

[Big Daddy]

It's fire breh.

Time to eat

 

[Randoug]

Not bad fam ...keep it up

 

[Lord Mecca]

it's alright man... gotta work on that delivery though... could be sharper.

 

[FrankieLymon757]

u mos def got potential......work on ur cadence tho g

 

[Yehuda]

What does it say at 00:23? "It's a cac environment"?

 

[Kisame]

THANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK GUYS I LOVE IT GOOD OR BAD

 

[Kisame]

What does it say at 00:23? "It's a cac environment"?

SIT BACK AND VIBE

 

[Kisame]

this rap shıt aint for everybody nice beat though.

TELL ME HOW TO IMPROVE IF THATS YOUR OPINION

 

[TheObserver]

Keep Practicing on Your Delivery.. You can be saying the Illest shyt Ever but if the Delivery is off it dont matter.. Keep Grinding..
Also props on being able to take Criticism,you came to the right place LOL

 

[Kisame]

Keep Practicing on Your Delivery.. You can be saying the Illest shyt Ever but if the Delivery is off it dont matter.. Keep Grinding..
Also props on being able to take Criticism,you came to the right place LOL

how am i supposed to grow if i can't take in criticism THAT'S WHY I CAME TO THE COLI i don't wanna end up like @C-Styles

 

[8====D]

TELL ME HOW TO IMPROVE IF THATS YOUR OPINION

i would consider studying the craft alittle better. . .maybe do some behind the scene/production first, and polish up your delivery and lyrical content as you go along!