fukk THE TUNNEL: aspiring WRAPPERS post yo shyt here where everyone can C!

[whknorth]

but first question.

I'm sitting here drinking this big ass bottle of pushkin vodka straight watchin my struggle videos and its so depressin koz my views are low.



so my question is how can an individual increase their shyt????

gues it wasn't meant to be.

 

[ImmaGetJoeClarkArrested]

Coming soon

 

[blackslash]

That first song got me weak

 

[whknorth]

That first song got me weak

 

[DaSk8D00D]

Will check your songs out when I get back to the crib fam. Us unknown internet rappers gotta stick together


Lemme just sliiiide this in here tho...

 

[WithTheShit]

 

[DaSk8D00D]

but first question.

I'm sitting here drinking this big ass bottle of pushkin vodka straight watchin my struggle videos and its so depressin koz my views are low.



so my question is how can an individual increase their shyt????

gues it wasn't meant to be.

Ima keep it real fam, you need work

beat selection is decent for what you're going for, and the content itself is solid enough, but your flow is pretty lacking. Not trying to shyt on you just tryna keep it 100 with constructive criticism. You just need way better bars bruh, you dont have any rhymes or lyrics that make me or anything like that, and you kinda wander off beat at points. your voice/delivery works for the style you're tryna go for but like i said, you gotta stay on beat more and come up with more interesting rhyme patterns.

I feel like your delivery & bars are fairly good, but that beat isn't really doing it for me like that . You've got skill tho

 

[45123]

No matter how good your music is your shyt will never pop off unless you can network/have huge luck

 

[tonyclifton]

but first question.

I'm sitting here drinking this big ass bottle of pushkin vodka straight watchin my struggle videos and its so depressin koz my views are low.



so my question is how can an individual increase their shyt????

gues it wasn't meant to be.

Beats are good but man you really need to learn wat a rhyme scheme is.

You rhyme like 4 times a verse

Voice is lacking.

Not try a to shyt on you but you need a lot of work

 

[Pop123]

No matter how good your music is your shyt will never pop off unless you can network/have huge luck

No way bro, if u can generate people to your youtube/twitter/whatever, get some traffic, then u already there, the stage is set, from there the determinate factor is if the records is poppin or not. If they are then u good money, no middle men, no chance encounter with Kanye, etc ..

 

[stealthbomber]

great timing for this thread


hip hop type shyt


edm type shyt


ill be uploading every few days

been lightweight dj'ing for a minute but i decided to really step into the ring about a month ago

i dont have a good controller board or serato yet so they're just mixes for now

all done in audacity

better music coming soon

 

[45123]

No way bro, if u can generate people to your youtube/twitter/whatever, get some traffic, then u already there, the stage is set, from there the determinate factor is if the records is poppin or not. If they are then u good money, no middle men, no chance encounter with Kanye, etc ..

And how do you generate views on your Youtube and Twitter and get traffic? By networking and promoting your music to the right people.

 

[GPBear]

fukk you and fukk your whack ass bullshyt,

1 starred, negged

"how do i increase my shyt" by stop being a and make something people actually want to listen to instead of feeling entitled to fans just because you put your shyt on youtube

 

[GPBear]

Fukk that shyt man, your first beat is a straight Dilla jack.



worthless biter

edit: you even start it off by going "yo"! Are you kidding me! Do you want to know where they buy their underwear so you can steal that too