Got 4 new tracks up

[MenacingMonk]

Need some feedback. Instead of making a new thread I'ma just up this. Here's some new tracks to show my progression. First one is my fav while the last one on my second post is my most recent. If you don't wanna hear 'em all, just listen to the first and last ones. Thanks

http://soundcloud.com/dirongawd/beats-rhymes-action-prod-by

http://soundcloud.com/dirongawd/youre-da-man

 

[MenacingMonk]

http://soundcloud.com/dirongawd/l-a-summerz-random-bars

http://soundcloud.com/dirongawd/soul-searching-1

Again, if you don't read my profile, I'm not mastering my vocals or the beats.

 

[PUT IN WORK]

Embed the 4 new tracks in this thread. You'll get a better feedback then. I have no idea which ones are new.

 

[MenacingMonk]

Embed the 4 new tracks in this thread. You'll get a better feedback then. I have no idea which ones are new.

How do you do that?

 

[PUT IN WORK]

How do you do that?

EDIT: just "put insert link" and remove the "s" in front of the http:
[ame="http://soundcloud.com/dirongawd/dreams-and-reality"]http://soundcloud.com/dirongawd/dreams-and-reality[/ame]

 

[MenacingMonk]

copy and paste a direct link to the track like this..

https://soundcloud.com/dirongawd/dreams-and-reality

I was expecting a media player to show up.

 

[MenacingMonk]

All right, cool, they're up.

 

[PUT IN WORK]

Were you going for that Immortal Technique type delivery? It's an improvement from the last tracks you put up last time (from what i recall). You're not packing sentences as much anymore and not forcing as much. On some of the tracks it still sounds like you're a reading. "Dreams and Reality" has a nice subject matter but it sounds like you're reading it. Trying using the same delivery and confidence in the 1st minute of "4-20 blues". That's your best delivery out of the 4 IMO and good place to build at. Hope that helps.

 

[MenacingMonk]

Were you going for that Immortal Technique type delivery? It's an improvement from the last tracks you put up last time (from what i recall). You're not packing sentences as much anymore and not forcing as much. On some of the tracks it still sounds like you're a reading. "Dreams and Reality" has a nice subject matter but it sounds like you're reading it. Trying using the same delivery and confidence in the 1st minute of "4-20 blues". That's your best delivery out of the 4 IMO and good place to build at. Hope that helps.

I actually only read the second verse of Dreams and Reality. All the others I memorized and spit off the head. I didn't feel like flowing on that beat like I did on 4:20 or others.

As for delivery, I had no one in mind. I was just doing me.

Thanks for the feed.

 

[OGmittee]

what program u use for recording vocals? and for making the beats for that matter?

Song 1--Thought that beat was pretty dope. I respect where you tried to go with the rap..The tone fit the beat well.

Song 2--Was ehhh. I wasnt feelin the flow too much tbh. Beat was pretty simplistic, maybe coulda brought the sample out more(?)

Song 3--I like the beat, pretty laid back, dope. Idk about the flow again, seems like you have too much to say in certain bars, just my opinion tho.

Song 4--Was straight, beat was cool, brought good energy with the rap.

 

[MenacingMonk]

what program u use for recording vocals? and for making the beats for that matter?

Song 1--Thought that beat was pretty dope. I respect where you tried to go with the rap..The tone fit the beat well.

Song 2--Was ehhh. I wasnt feelin the flow too much tbh. Beat was pretty simplistic, maybe coulda brought the sample out more(?)

Song 3--I like the beat, pretty laid back, dope. Idk about the flow again, seems like you have too much to say in certain bars, just my opinion tho.

Song 4--Was straight, beat was cool, brought good energy with the rap.

For vocals I'm using audacity since it's free.

I make beats on the MV.

I was told you can record vocals on the MV, too. I never thought of that. I'm sure I can mix my vocals high and low on there, too. I'm just too lazy to figure it out so I'm using audacity.

Preciate the feed. I like how you didn't care for 4:20 Blues but PIW thought I did better with the flow in 1/2 of it.

 

[MenacingMonk]

Uppin with new tracks.

 

[MenacingMonk]

Stupid shytty site.

EDIT:

All right, could only put 2 links in 1 reply. Thankfully I had a post under my first. Anyways, all 4 on on the first 2 posts.

http://soundcloud.com/dirongawd/

 

[MenacingMonk]

Bah, fukk you guys.