Hey Coli rate my song

[observe]

 

[Beegio]

 

[Beegio]

You the first dude?

 

[Taadow]

It was aiight...

 

[Raye82]

Wow...I'm impressed. That beat . Also, you are very brave for putting it on here .

 

[Dirty_Jerz]

this hard breh

that drop

 

[Ashley Banks]

It's pretty good.

 

[observe]

You the first dude?

Ya

 

[Desirous]

 

[observe]

Thx @Deadpool1986

Thx y'ally'all

 

[QuintessentialBM]

It's not terrible.... Some constructive criticism..... Put a singer on it and have them write real lyrics on the chorus part then build your song around that...

 

[Desirous]

It's not terrible.... Some constructive criticism..... Put a singer on it and have them write real lyrics on the chorus part then build your song around that...

I can sing...pick me! (I got that Disney voice though so it's not gonna work lol)

 

[MekaCatt]

 

[observe]

I can sing...pick me! (I got that Disney voice though so it's not gonna work lol)

Ok..when ever you come to the bay we can work on something

 

[Desirous]

Ok..when ever you come to the bay we can work on something

lol