I need my Coli brehs to help (RapGame)

[Dotcom]

All the music in tha rap game, been either real Soft or unlyrical and gangster
so i'm tryna get in this to change some stuff around and take it back to the Poet

I need some people that know how to Produce and Mix down tracks, I know all my brehs is talented
and I need some help this what im working with ..i know im far from being there but I wanna become a perfectionist where improvement is all the error of becoming better and better.. who can help breh?

 

[TL15]

All the music in tha rap game, been either real Soft or unlyrical and gangster
so i'm tryna get in this to change some stuff around and take it back to the Poet

*mouth gun noises are the first thing heard on the track*

"caught him at the light...red light turned to green light
before you see the hand signals blast blast...shot him twice
I aimed at his head, but his body I could hit precise..."

the first things we hear are about you killing some fictional nygga huh is that the "poetry" you want to get back to?

I don't even want to get into the actual "skill" of the song (the rapping, voice, cadence, wordplay all need a LOT of improvement) but why are you rapping about killing somebody and talking about how you want to shift the culture?

No disrespect (because I am all about people chasing their dreams) but what are your real goals? Why are you saying you want to be a poet but doing a very very very poor impersonation of a street rapper? Are you trying to be a "lyricist"? If so then re-write your songs, edit them, re-work them, master them. Are you trying to be a "storyteller"? If so, what story are you telling? This seems like a bad lil wayne styled rapper but with way worse punchlines.

 

[Dotcom]

*mouth gun noises are the first thing heard on the track*

"caught him at the light...red light turned to green light
before you see the hand signals blast blast...shot him twice
I aimed at his head, but his body I could hit precise..."

the first things we hear are about you killing some fictional nygga huh is that the "poetry" you want to get back to?

I don't even want to get into the actual "skill" of the song (the rapping, voice, cadence, wordplay all need a LOT of improvement) but why are you rapping about killing somebody and talking about how you want to shift the culture?

No disrespect (because I am all about people chasing their dreams) but what are your real goals? Why are you saying you want to be a poet but doing a very very very poor impersonation of a street rapper? Are you trying to be a "lyricist"? If so then re-write your songs, edit them, re-work them, master them. Are you trying to be a "storyteller"? If so, what story are you telling? This seems like a bad lil wayne styled rapper but with way worse punchlines.

I don't have a ghost writer bro...so u saying ima need a ghost writer..because I write everything myself..all my shyt aint killing but yeah i can touch any story fam..im from stlouis Mo.. so I can talk about anything... if u think i cant...u can contact me on it

 

[Dotcom]

I'm looking for the helpers not the hatin...cuz i could be better then someone u might ride they dikk on oneday

 

[TL15]

I don't have a ghost writer bro...so u saying ima need a ghost writer..because I write everything myself..all my shyt aint killing but yeah i can touch any story fam..im from stlouis Mo.. so I can talk about anything... if u think i cant...u can contact me on it

what part of the Lou? Just curious

I'm not saying you "can't" do anything. I'm going off of the example I was given (that you provided, uploaded on youtube, and recorded)

I'm not saying you need a ghost writer or anything. Just need to practice and get better. Go and get it though

 

[Dotcom]

what part of the Lou? Just curious

I'm not saying you "can't" do anything. I'm going off of the example I was given (that you provided, uploaded on youtube, and recorded)

I'm not saying you need a ghost writer or anything. Just need to practice and get better. Go and get it though

thats what im trying to do bro..get better I want to become a perfectionist ..im just glad u even listened ..cuz alot of people only listen to people when they buzzin not underground..so thanks

 

[Henri Christophe]

Quit

 

[2manyFCKNrappers]

you aren't good.

 

[Dotcom]

Quit

fukk u and the niqqa stomach u came out of lol

 

[Dotcom]

you aren't good.

we will see...in 2 yrs from now bro..ima hold u to that one...i eat up the devil aura..i use it as GODs POWER...i take the evil and turn ya own magic against u

I c00n the devil..lol i am what u never expected will emerge

 

[Dotcom]

Quit

thank u for listening

 

[Ol’Otis]

the art of mixing is a good book


you might just wanna listen to a lot of
classic and hip hop and soul albums
70s to the early 00s

 

[Dotcom]

the art of mixing is a good book


you might just wanna listen to a lot of
classic and hip hop and soul albums
70s to the early 00s

Thank you bro...my friends was saying the same..to take it back to the roots of Hiphop and I love it...thats what made me wanna do poetry

 

[Dotcom]

the art of mixing is a good book


you might just wanna listen to a lot of
classic and hip hop and soul albums
70s to the early 00s

I just caught the keyword...was SOUL... thank u bro