I recorded a new track today. S/O 703 & 757

[†ZULU â€]

[ame=http://soundcloud.com/zulu-9/obsidiantears]ObsidianTears[/ame]
it's a little lo-fi

I recorded this today. It's been awhile since I've managed to record, I've been stuck in this rut for the longest.

I'd really appreciate some honest feedback from the brehs.

Please and Thank You

 

[Double Burger With Cheese]

Loosen up on the mic. Your flow is kind of robotic. But this some nice lil smooth shyt. But its still too short, even for a freestyle. Its more like an interlude.

 

[observe]

ObsidianTears
it's a little lo-fi

I recorded this today. It's been awhile since I've managed to record, I've been stuck in this rut for the longest.

I'd really appreciate some honest feedback from the brehs.

Please and Thank You

What sample is that from?

 

[†ZULU â€]

I really appreciate the feedback.

Yea, the flow is a little stiff at times, this one's much more poetic than my old stuff.

I see what you're saying with the interlude thing. Idk, I don't really do tracks past 2-3 minutes. Long tracks bore me.
I like albums that are all quality so I don't have to skip through songs, so that's what I try to do with all of my songs. No filler.

SparkMcGwire thanks for the listen breh

 

[humble Hermit]

What sample is that from?

SWV rain

 

[†ZULU â€]

What sample is that from?

It's not even a sample, it's just an old SWV song, slowed down

 

[humble Hermit]

Aye meant to comment. Not too bad. You from my side of the dmv, keep it up. Got beats as well

 

[†ZULU â€]

Aye meant to comment. Not too bad. You from my side of the dmv, keep it up. Got beats as well

 

[observe]

Loosen up on the mic. Your flow is kind of robotic. But this some nice lil smooth shyt. But its still too short, even for a freestyle. Its more like an interlude.

It sounds robotic cuz he stacked the vocals ..I can barely here what he's saying..

I really appreciate the feedback.

Yea, the flow is a little stiff at times, this one's much more poetic than my old stuff.

I see what you're saying with the interlude thing. Idk, I don't really do tracks past 2-3 minutes. Long tracks bore me.
I like albums that are all quality so I don't have to skip through songs, so that's what I try to do with all of my songs. No filler.

SparkMcGwire thanks for the listen breh

It's a dope song but its too short..try stacking the vocals manually by rapping over the verse the second time instead of copying and pasting it..or don't stack them at all

 

[†ZULU â€]

It sounds robotic cuz he stacked the vocals ..I can barely here what he's saying..



It's a dope song but its too short..try stacking the vocals manually by rapping over the verse the second time instead of copying and pasting it..or don't stack them at all

But I did stack them manually I rapped it twice and stacked them.

I know my annunciation could've been better at places, I just wanted to know what yall thought about it. It's the first rap I've recorded in like a year.

 

[observe]

But I did stack them manually I rapped it twice and stacked them.

I know my annunciation could've been better at places, I just wanted to know what yall thought about it. It's the first rap I've recorded in like a year.

I don't know..I'm not a sound engineer..but dont stack them or get it mixed better..but I'm not trying to hate.this is the best song I've heard on the coli..it just needs to be longer and mixed better.. I can def vibe to this..you should sit down and make a real song to this..I'll bump it

 

[†ZULU â€]

I don't know..I'm not a sound engineer..but dont stack them or get it mixed better..but I'm not trying to hate.this is the best song I've heard on the coli..it just needs to be longer and mixed better.. I can def vibe to this..you should sit down and make a real song to this..I'll bump it

Thank you. This track seems to be getting way more love than my usual ultraviolent shyt.
This is the first time I've kept it all the way 100.

Honestly, I'm really starting to think that it's time to finish writing my EP then start saving up for studio time.
I know how I want my vocals to sound, but I'm just not getting it on my own.

I really appreciate the feedback, thank you

 

[†ZULU â€]

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