DialeKt757
I'm from the home of the slaves.
This is just a part of the intro for my album I'm working on. Let me know what y'all think.
If you want lyricism.
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This is just a part of the intro for my album I'm working on. Let me know what y'all think.
DialeKt757
I'm from the home of the slaves.
lol okay
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cac
OG Talk
Archived
Plus rep for having the courage to post this on here..
Big Mel
@bigboss
awful. you have the command of a girl scout.
"stomped out byastard"
toughen up, flaco.
"stomped out byastard"
toughen up, flaco.
the cac mamba
Banned
u can spit 
if i had a comment it would be put a lil more bass in ur voice. drink a 40 or somethin
if i had a comment it would be put a lil more bass in ur voice. drink a 40 or somethin
The Dust King
A Childrens Story
this was cool, you can def tell ur from VA or down south u sounded like Quan a few times
your problem which is like time square lights big is you can pronounce your own lyrics and flows.
your writing at this "nas" level and your reciting skills are on a "big noyd" level.
practice breath control. also stop writing lyrical pockets like that because it detracts from lyrics when your winded going through your own rhyme.
that part where you talked about spinal cord was when I was like "OK, enough". you need another year of practice.
no matter what u say it should be on beat, 4 counts to a bar.
your problem which is like time square lights big is you can pronounce your own lyrics and flows.
your writing at this "nas" level and your reciting skills are on a "big noyd" level.
practice breath control. also stop writing lyrical pockets like that because it detracts from lyrics when your winded going through your own rhyme.
that part where you talked about spinal cord was when I was like "OK, enough". you need another year of practice.
no matter what u say it should be on beat, 4 counts to a bar.
The Dust King
A Childrens Story
dead@ ur semi positive criticism but u 1 starrin his threadu can spit
if i had a comment it would be put a lil more bass in ur voice. drink a 40 or somethin
u fcked upAs for this video...all ur "lyrical miracle spirtual rhymes" aint gon do u no good if u dnt provide the necessary elements to make ur lyrics stick...which are a powerful delivery and strong/commanding voice.....simplify ur writing a tad to focus on the more important aspect of energy ad delivery
the cac mamba
Banned
dead@ ur semi positive criticism but u 1 starrin his thread
DialeKt757
I'm from the home of the slaves.
For one, my lyrics are on beat. My breath control is fine, I dunno what you're talking about. I appreciate all of the feedback though. I never mentioned anything about a spinal cord, so I don't know what you were hearing.
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DialeKt757
I'm from the home of the slaves.
LOL that was actually pretty hilarious. I was actually pretty fukked up when I recorded this, so I didn't rap it with the same conviction I normally do. I just put it up for the sake of some people wanting to hear it.It's nothing to re record it. I've done quite a few open mics and no one had a hard time hearing what I said or any problems with my performance. This video is just a temporary one. I think that the funniest thing about some of you nikkas on here is that y'all wouldn't be able to put together a verse that was interesting at all. I have yet to hear anyone on here with solid multi's. This is just something light, for real. I'll be posting another video soon. When any of you nikkas can come back with anything that's even close to being as technical as the song I'm gonna post, then come talk to me. I'll be waiting for a long time, I know.