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Hawaiian Punch

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The I in Team
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In the cut like neosporin,
Spewin hatred to all foreigners,
Sippin henny and coke,
Color of vermilion
Chillin wit my children in the building,
Building,
Looking like Christ with his disciples,
Burn trees, judas on the left with the lighter.
He wanna spark me, then spark me,
But I'm gods seed.
Righteous,
Right and just,
But what that mean next to hatred and lust?
Envy and hate,
Rats and snakes,
Fork tongued friends skewing a path that's straight.
Killers and whores infected by the common cause,
It's the disease of more.
Consumed by the success of the mountaintop,
On top of the mountain, now it's just a rock.
The perception is just a reflection of the state you in,
The glass that's half empty gets filled with sin.
 

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