IMO J Electronica Dear Moleskine verse is a top 10 verse of all time

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really break down what this man was saying....this is real art, real hiphop, real brilliance....also the beat was the perfect back drop


Have you ever ever ever been depressed so bad
It was a struggle every day not to regret your past
Feeling cursed like you never ever get your swag
And you be speeding down the highway when your threshold pass
When you cried all your tears out
And one page of your diary can tell you what your year bout
That's a lonely place
My mama said son why such a lonely face
Because the pressures (depression) on me
Plus I feel like bill murray trapped in Punxsutawney
Dr phil told me that I can sell crack or hit the army
Look at where we live at
Tell me you don't hear that
Tell me you don't feel that
Show me to the way out
Tell me when pastor raphael gon' reveal that
If not man I'm outta here
I'm just a sleep walking robot that's outta gear
I stick my nose out the water to the sky for air
Lama sabachthani (translates to 'why have you forsaken me')
Trying to see light but the devil trying to blind me
The grim reaper walking with a shovel right behind me
Trying to introduce me to the untimely unkindly
Walk the line finely like johnny cash
But I keep getting visits from the ghost of the past
So I spark another l then I go to the pad.



this whole verse is beautiful from start to finish
 

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"Plus I feel like bill murray trapped in Punxsutawney
Dr phil told me that I can sell crack or hit the army
Look at where we live at
Tell me you don't hear that
Tell me you don't feel that
Show me to the way out
Tell me when pastor raphael gon' reveal that
If not man I'm outta here
I'm just a sleep walking robot that's outta gear
I stick my nose out the water to the sky for air
Lama sabachthani (translates to 'why have you forsaken me')
Trying to see light but the devil trying to blind me
The grim reaper walking with a shovel right behind me
Trying to introduce me to the untimely unkindly"

 

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alotta people really don't care anymore about the art of lyricism but I do...I appreciate the true are of hiphop....I can feel what j was saying....this take me back when we really used ti break lyrics down and argue about them at the lunch table...that was a fun time
 

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"Have you ever ever ever been depressed so bad
It was a struggle every day not to regret your past
Feeling cursed like you never ever get your swag
And you be speeding down the highway when your threshold pass
When you cried all your tears out
And one page of your diary can tell you what your year bout
That's a lonely place
My mama said son why such a lonely face
Because the pressures on me"
:salute: pure brilliance....to bad alotta ppl wont ever appreciate it...i wish jay dropped this in 91...i swear it would be put in a shrine
 
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:scusthov: Im glad i have never jumped on this dudes wave, dude is boring fake deep spoken word bullshyt. rhymes posted did not showcase any kind of superior technique or elite lyrcism.

i could care less if this dude ever spits again i never and never will listen to him, dude is garbage aint he like 40 :russ:
 

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:scusthov: Im glad i have never jumped on this dudes wave, dude is boring fake deep spoken word bullshyt. rhymes posted did not showcase any kind of superior technique or elite lyrcism.

i could care less if this dude ever spits again i never and never will listen to him, dude is garbage aint he like 40 :russ:
:snoop: bro u couldnt just keep that to yourself and let us enjoy the verse
 

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"Have you ever ever ever been depressed so bad
It was a struggle every day not to regret your past
Feeling cursed like you never ever get your swag
And you be speeding down the highway when your threshold pass
When you cried all your tears out
And one page of your diary can tell you what your year bout
That's a lonely place
My mama said son why such a lonely face
Because the pressures on me"
:salute: pure brilliance....to bad alotta ppl wont ever appreciate it...i wish jay dropped this in 91...i swear it would be put in a shrine

u knw i had to bring this up, this is imo his best record to date



:wow:

this shyt hits home :mjcry:
 
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