is rakim the first to use internal rhymes

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basically internal rhymes are rhyming syllables that are not at the end of the bar.

i think rakim was the first to employ it on a consistent basis
 

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Can you give me an example?

Been playing the classics the past week
 

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[11:36] cllmemayb14: sup?!
[11:36] juelzenclade20: wuts up? Who is this
[11:36] cllmemayb14: i want 2 talk about rhyme schemes. Im a girl is that ok? Lol
[11:36] juelzenclade20: yeah that cool
I never had a girl aim me bout rhyme schemes bfore
[11:36] cllmemayb14: :-)
[11:37] cllmemayb14: so whats a rhyme scheme? I want to start writing rhymes
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[11:39] cllmemayb14: ya lol
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[11:43] cllmemayb14: nope! Whats a multi?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: do multis mean multi syllables?
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how u been quik and also examples of what ? what a internal rhyme is or rakim using internal rhymes

I'm good thanks bro how things over there?

Lost my cousin to a car accident just last week. She was only 18. God bless her

So I mean like an example of rakim using an internal rhyme?
 

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I'm good thanks bro how things over there?

Lost my cousin to a car accident just last week. She was only 18. God bless her

So I mean like an example of rakim using an internal rhyme?

sorry to hear that
my condolences to your family.

and here is example of internal rhyme



Thinking of a master plan
Cause
ain’t nothing but sweat inside my hand

see how he rhymes hand and plan at the end of the bar

but he rhymes other syllables that are not at the end of the bar
like cause and of and not with but
 
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