PhonZhi
Veteran
Super-heroic/
boost the moon through a poems'/
landscape/
to make ya hands wave/
like the movements of oceans
verse starts @2:25
Ive Always Loved This AABBA Rhyme Pattern By eLzhi
- Thread starter PhonZhi
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Super-heroic/
boost the moon through a poems'/
landscape/
to make ya hands wave/
like the movements of oceans
verse starts @2:25
pointproven214
i speak facts not emotions
no disrespect but this simple rhyme schemes imo.
and u forgot some rhymes.
[Verse 1: Ransom]
Yo its all about guns N butta, Like Melvin from Baby Boy
Come through & thug your mother
Leave your baby boys undercovers undiscovered
Thats what you get for talking to them undercovers (snitch)
And when it rains, run for cover
Cause the slugs'll hover
And penetrate to leave you thugs to suffer
and u forgot some rhymes.
[Verse 1: Ransom]
Yo its all about guns N butta, Like Melvin from Baby Boy
Come through & thug your mother
Leave your baby boys undercovers undiscovered
Thats what you get for talking to them undercovers (snitch)
And when it rains, run for cover
Cause the slugs'll hover
And penetrate to leave you thugs to suffer
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Verse 2 Elzhi
Your girls another, shot the thot - yo fam u love her?
Cuz I'm A lethal weapon, dapper Dan to Glove her,
Drop top the top sedan got a plan that's summer,
You flip flop, I mock stans while u stand some lumber (faq)
OnlyInCalifornia
Southern California/Vegas
PhonZhi
Veteran
pointproven214
i speak facts not emotions
PhonZhi
Veteran
Is op a baronx alias? These idiot makes multi syllable threads every few months
pointproven214
i speak facts not emotions
predictable 2-syllable flow
lmao u tripping homie .
an El and AZ collab would be....
pointproven214
i speak facts not emotions
[Big Punisher]
Hey yo my shyt's the truth, 150 proof no question
Parental discretion advised, keep out the eyes of the youth
It's too explicit, bullshyt! I challenge the statistics
Violence existed before our music was even suggested
Arrested on sight, it's like there's no rights
That's why I rhyme so aggressive and bring every message to life
I fight the power, spite the power the 90 percent
Keep 10 and feed Twin half for personal reasons
The seasons change.. things re-arrange, but I stay the same
Play the game, for the wealth, until I've made myself a name
So blame it all on the gangster rapper, thanks to Joey Crack
For the chance to do it my way like Frank Sinatra
I ain't a actor so it's all facts, strictly raw rap
Totally intended for yours dressed in all black
With the ski mask, or the pantyhose makin cameos
In liquor store cameras with the twin Calico's
Hey yo my shyt's the truth, 150 proof no question
Parental discretion advised, keep out the eyes of the youth
It's too explicit, bullshyt! I challenge the statistics
Violence existed before our music was even suggested
Arrested on sight, it's like there's no rights
That's why I rhyme so aggressive and bring every message to life
I fight the power, spite the power the 90 percent
Keep 10 and feed Twin half for personal reasons
The seasons change.. things re-arrange, but I stay the same
Play the game, for the wealth, until I've made myself a name
So blame it all on the gangster rapper, thanks to Joey Crack
For the chance to do it my way like Frank Sinatra
I ain't a actor so it's all facts, strictly raw rap
Totally intended for yours dressed in all black
With the ski mask, or the pantyhose makin cameos
In liquor store cameras with the twin Calico's
with any neg talk
PhonZhi
Veteran
The syllable sensei
