jay-z is so underrated with rhyme schemes it's disgusting

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we know he good with metaphors wordplay but rhyme schemes he ridiculous.

[Jay-Z]
Here's (A) a couple of (B) suggestions of how you could (C) finesse it (D)
You find (A) a dude in town, you (B) send (B) him a short (C) message (D)
(E)
Say, "Hey, I'm new in (F) town, I don't know my (E) way (A) around (F)
But I got some soft white that's sure to come back brown
 

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wouldnt say he's underrated :beli:
 

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for those of u wondering why i put a letter next to each rhyme sound because that is how u supposed label a rhyme scheme in poetry so
and tell what rhymes with what
 

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fukk his schemes, he a rapper and thats not why he's rich because of his rhymes. It's the business model behind that package.
 

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@intilectual recipricol

we know he good with metaphors wordplay but rhyme schemes he ridiculous.

[Jay-Z]
Here's (A) a couple of (B) suggestions of how you could (C) finesse it (D)
You find (A) a dude in town, you (B) send (B) him a short (C) message (D)
(E)
Say, "Hey, I'm new in (F) town, I don't know my (E) way (A) around (F)
But I got some soft white that's sure to come back brown
He can't be underrated because nobody else rates rhyme schemes but you.
 

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OP is correct

Young H.O/
pitch da yay FAITHFUL/
even if THEY PATROL/
i made PAYROLL/
Benz PAID FOR/
friends, THEY ROLL/
private jets down to Turks & CAICOS/
'Cris CASE LOADS/
I dont give a shyt
nikka 1 life to live
I cant let a DAY GO...
Yeah schematically Hov is on another level on another plane already... HOV he got his own lane already :mjpls:

u gotta admit that rhyme scheme was sick.
 

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[Jay-Z]
I(A) got the feds (B) sending (B) me letters 'cause Im (C) schooling (B) (D) the youth (E)
But they cant (A) lock me down 'cause my (C)tool is (D) the (E) truth
Yeah I sold drugs for a living, thats a (F) given (G)
Why is it? why dont y'all try to visit the neighboorhoods I (F) lived in (G)
My (H) mind (J) been through hell, my neighborhood is (H)crime (J)central
 
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