Jay Z's 2nd verse of D'Evils>>any verse by a NY rapper

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People swear up in down that Nas and Jay are the only two emcees in the history of NY...

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There are so many great verses to declare just one

But here are my top 10 (no order)

-Rakim's 2nd verse on Let The Rhythm Hit Em
-Prodigy's 1st verse on White Lines
-Biggie's 1st verse on Victory
-Nas 2nd verse on Memory Lane
-Jay's Last Verse on Hovi Baby
-AZ' 2nd verse on Rather Unique
-Kool G Raps 1st verse on Kool Is Back
-Cappadonnas verse on Winter Warz
-Big Pun's 2nd verse on Beware
-Nas Verbal Intercourse
 

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People swear up in down that Nas and Jay are the only two emcees in the history of NY...

:pachaha:


There are so many great verses to declare just one

But here are my top 10 (no order)

-Rakim's 2nd verse on Let The Rhythm Hit Em
-Prodigy's 1st verse on White Lines
-Biggie's 1st verse on Victory
-Nas 2nd verse on Memory Lane
-Jay's Last Verse on Hovi Baby
-AZ' 2nd verse on Rather Unique
-Kool G Raps 1st verse on Kool Is Back
-Cappadonnas verse on Winter Warz
-Big Pun's 2nd verse on Beware
-Nas Verbal Intercourse

:duck: how u gon pick hovi baby over d'evils :thumbsdown: hovi baby is a great verse but it probably wouldnt make my top 10 jay verses in 2000s, even my favorite of 03
 

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Well no, you see how the line made sense to you despite not knowing of the clear obvious secondary reference? Thats just an added bonus.

As for the naS portion of your other post, im not being overly picky, when you use IMAGERY youre creating an IMAGE. The image of someone unfolding a scroll is beyond stupid. Its not my fault that neither nas nor his listeners know what a scroll is and further goes on to prove my point.

you see the things im pointing out are what make me say it doesnt make sense. To me since I know what im talkin about it sounds like a nicca just sayin shyt cuz his fans dont know the difference which you confirmed. Same thing happened on Jay's Allure till someone linked what "eleventy" actually was.

You're ducking the question. Explain how fukking was a necessary word in Jay's line. If that's going to be your criteria you have to apply it to Jay as well.

Unfolding a scroll, as opposed to unrolling, makes sense. For you to claim otherwise means that you are simply burying your head in the sand.
 

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You're ducking the question. Explain how fukking was a necessary word in Jay's line. If that's going to be your criteria you have to apply it to Jay as well.

Unfolding a scroll, as opposed to unrolling, makes sense. For you to claim otherwise means that you are simply burying your head in the sand.

No, unrolling a scroll and unfolding a scroll are two different things because you dont unfold a scroll. Its like when you take your girl to a baseball game and she asks when halftime is. She wouldnt ask that shyt if she knew what she was talking about.

how can you not see that a better writer wouldnt unfold a scroll? Plus this whole shyt is supposed to seem deep and smart, but the nicca in the second bar is unfolding scrolls. Hes clearly rappin about shyt he has no clue about trying to sound smart.

So what this nicca actually said is he unfolds scrolls to make his seeds run aimlessly around the world. Im sorry if im not impressed. He could have told a story instead of wasting bars.
 

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No, unrolling a scroll and unfolding a scroll are two different things because you dont unfold a scroll. Its like when you take your girl to a baseball game and she asks when halftime is. She wouldnt ask that shyt if she knew what she was talking about.

how can you not see that a better writer wouldnt unfold a scroll? Plus this whole shyt is supposed to seem deep and smart, but the nicca in the second bar is unfolding scrolls. Hes clearly rappin about shyt he has no clue about trying to sound smart.

So what this nicca actually said is he unfolds scrolls to make his seeds run aimlessly around the world. Im sorry if im not impressed. He could have told a story instead of wasting bars.

But "unfolds" makes sense because you were able to deduce that the word he should have said was "unrolls" - had he said something like "I consume the scroll" in place of unrolls - that wouldn't have made sense.

You're still ducking the question about Jay and his use of an unnecessary word :snoop:
 

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But "unfolds" makes sense because you were able to deduce that the word he should have said was "unrolls" - had he said something like "I consume the scroll" in place of unrolls - that wouldn't have made sense.

You're still ducking the question about Jay and his use of an unnecessary word :snoop:

Youre really reaching trying to get a W out of this. Jay didnt use uneccessary words, uneccessary would be like if he did what naS does and add life after trife to make a multi with the previous line.

Ima make a thread where I can school naS fans about lyricism.
 

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Youre really reaching trying to get a W out of this. Jay didnt use uneccessary words, uneccessary would be like if he did what naS does and add life after trife to make a multi with the previous line.

Ima make a thread where I can school naS fans about lyricism.

But that's exactly what he did. fukking was completely unnecessary. It was only there to make a multi with fukking life/Nothing Nice.

He threw an extra word in there to make it rhyme. That's exactly what you are criticizing Nas for. You need to apply that criticism equally. The fact that you have refused to do so thus far - weakens your whole line of reasoning for criticizing Illmatic.
 

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People swear up in down that Nas and Jay are the only two emcees in the history of NY...

:pachaha:


There are so many great verses to declare just one

But here are my top 10 (no order)

-Rakim's 2nd verse on Let The Rhythm Hit Em
-Prodigy's 1st verse on White Lines
-Biggie's 1st verse on Victory
-Nas 2nd verse on Memory Lane
-Jay's Last Verse on Hovi Baby
-AZ' 2nd verse on Rather Unique
-Kool G Raps 1st verse on Kool Is Back
-Cappadonnas verse on Winter Warz
-Big Pun's 2nd verse on Beware
-Nas Verbal Intercourse

lol at cappdonna's verse being better then any verse jay spit on d'evils.

fukk out of here !
 

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we used to stay up all night at slumber parties- Jay-Z :bryan:

nahh its not the best verse by an NY rapper.

all he had to say was "house" instead of slumber and it would have worked the same..why jay, why?

96 jay was not to be triffled with sad to see what he is now...so much potential.

AZ:
Visualizing the realism of life and actuality
fukk who's the baddest, a person's status depends on salary
And my mentality is money-orientated
I'm destined to live the dream for all my peeps who never made it
Cause yeah, we were beginners in the hood as 5 percenters
But something must of got in us cause all of us turned to sinners
Now some resting in peace and some are sitting in San Quentin
Others such as myself are trying to carry on tradition
Keeping this wealth professing street ghetto essence inside us
Cause it provides us with the proper insight to guide us
Even though, we know somehow we all gotta go
But as long as we leaving thieving, we'll be leaving with some kind of dough
So, until that day we expire and turn to vapors
Me and my capers will be somewhere else stacking plenty papers
Keeping it real, packing steel, getting high
Cause life's a bytch and then you die

I'd say this verse is better :manny;
 
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