Lately Ive been experimenting with new styles and techniques... would love feedback on some new shyt

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silver haze is aiite, could use better drum samples, or better mixing, but I like the freestyle beat better, just because I can hear a dope flow if someone (the right person) were to lace it with rhymes, other than that it's a dope experimental project, keep us updated on here would love to see you evolve, mahalo for sharing.
 

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the first one is good as it is, i think :manny: some beats are just basic. Yet the second one is crazy! the drums are piff, and the beginning is dope, if you were to mix that up or incorporate it into the rest of the beat you can take someone on a ride musically with lots of mental twists and turns where at the end of listening to the beat they are like :whoo: and have to hear it again just to process some of the different transitions then have to listen to it 2-3 more times just to put it all together.

You stuff is dope, whatever you are doin keep it up.
 

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the first one is good as it is, i think :manny: some beats are just basic. Yet the second one is crazy! the drums are piff, and the beginning is dope, if you were to mix that up or incorporate it into the rest of the beat you can take someone on a ride musically with lots of mental twists and turns where at the end of listening to the beat they are like :whoo: and have to hear it again just to process some of the different transitions then have to listen to it 2-3 more times just to put it all together.

You stuff is dope, whatever you are doin keep it up.
Dude you were so on point with the feedback!! Much appreciated. Cause I just needed to use that first part as the chorus, turn the horns up, and this shyt is flames! Im hopin I can sell it.

Ill post the finished version in the next few days... just gotta sort out a few drum transitions, chorus length, and mix
 

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Dude you were so on point with the feedback!! Much appreciated. Cause I just needed to use that first part as the chorus, turn the horns up, and this shyt is flames! Im hopin I can sell it.

Ill post the finished version in the next few days... just gotta sort out a few drum transitions, chorus length, and mix


Im glad it makes sense. I think everyone has those beats where there are separate sections/pieces/transitions that are all put together for 1 track or song. Most songs have 1 or 2 different pieces, i want to say traditionally 3 (verse, chorus/hook, breakdown/bridge).

Just goin off of the top of my head and not listening for accuracy the DOA (no ID and Kanye) beat and maybe Show me what you got (Just Blaze) are like that. like its not just a loop, there are lots of different pieces and sections that are put together and its dope. I think might be able to mix it up in that type of fashion, either way its dope and im eager to hear what you got.
 

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Im glad it makes sense. I think everyone has those beats where there are separate sections/pieces/transitions that are all put together for 1 track or song. Most songs have 1 or 2 different pieces, i want to say traditionally 3 (verse, chorus/hook, breakdown/bridge).

Just goin off of the top of my head and not listening for accuracy the DOA (no ID and Kanye) beat and maybe Show me what you got (Just Blaze) are like that. like its not just a loop, there are lots of different pieces and sections that are put together and its dope. I think might be able to mix it up in that type of fashion, either way its dope and im eager to hear what you got.
Here's the final version..
 
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