Looking for critique on first Music Video I shot and edited

[L&HH]

wassup with that dance haha

I fukk with the dance. I can see that shyt on vine videos. nikkas be like ......... when they tax refund come in

 

[JasonSJackson]

I fukk with the dance. I can see that shyt on vine videos. nikkas be like ......... when they tax refund come in

hahaha

 

[Trillion]

I fukk with the dance. I can see that shyt on vine videos. nikkas be like ......... when they tax refund come in

hahaha

yoooooo haha for real do it bruh for real

 

[L&HH]

hahaha

I think I just gave you a way to make this song go viral. Just dub that shyt the "I gotem mad dance". Take that dance clip, throw it on on a vine, instagram video clip with I gotem mad in the background. The song is pretty catchy btw

That's pretty much how im a stoner blew up

 

[JasonSJackson]

I think I just gave you a way to make this song go viral. Just dub that shyt the "I gotem mad dance". Take that dance clip, throw it on on a vine, instagram video clip with I gotem mad in the background. The song is pretty catchy btw

That's pretty much how im a stoner blew up

 

[smokeurobinson]

My breakdown:

The rappers aren't saying anything ground breaking and sound like the everyday run of the mil sh*t thats out today. I immediatly stopped takin the lyrics serious when the 1st dude said he dances on the body after shooting and wont run until his boys force him to leave. The 2nd rapper I liked more then the 1st. He looks like a young hooligan. He was the better of the 3. The 3rd dude like the 1st looks too old to be rapping. Hopefully the older cats are just doing it for fun and aren't trying to really be rappers. As for the visual.....Its exactly what I'd expect for such a song. Only gripe I had was that you had over a minute of nothingness at the end of the video.


return the favor and critique my video

http://www.thecoli.com/threads/i-ma...-dogs-and-the-feedback-is-pretty-good.210372/

 

[L&HH]

My breakdown:

The rappers aren't saying anything ground breaking and sound like the everyday run of the mil sh*t thats out today. I immediatly stopped takin the lyrics serious when the 1st dude said he dances on the body after shooting and wont run until his boys force him to leave. The 2nd rapper I liked more then the 1st. He looks like a young hooligan. He was the better of the 3. The 3rd dude like the 1st looks too old to be rapping. Hopefully the older cats are just doing it for fun and aren't trying to really be rappers. As for the visual.....Its exactly what I'd expect for such a song. Only gripe I had was that you had over a minute of nothingness at the end of the video.


return the favor and critique my video

http://www.thecoli.com/threads/i-ma...-dogs-and-the-feedback-is-pretty-good.210372/

breh I thought that shyt was hilarious

 

[tonyclifton]

The video is decent but that song is so damn horrible it didn't really give you any room for creativity

The first dude rapping has the personality of a rock and looks like Durant and Westbrook had a retarded baby and the second dude just sucks. Third dude sucks also

Hopefully you can work with a song that can expand your creativity as an editor

 

[JasonSJackson]

My breakdown:

The rappers aren't saying anything ground breaking and sound like the everyday run of the mil sh*t thats out today. I immediatly stopped takin the lyrics serious when the 1st dude said he dances on the body after shooting and wont run until his boys force him to leave. The 2nd rapper I liked more then the 1st. He looks like a young hooligan. He was the better of the 3. The 3rd dude like the 1st looks too old to be rapping. Hopefully the older cats are just doing it for fun and aren't trying to really be rappers. As for the visual.....Its exactly what I'd expect for such a song. Only gripe I had was that you had over a minute of nothingness at the end of the video.


return the favor and critique my video

http://www.thecoli.com/threads/i-ma...-dogs-and-the-feedback-is-pretty-good.210372/

Went to peep urs but can't watch it cause of the porn