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Tell me what you like about the rhyme scheme OP

well pac actually rhymed syllables not words or phrases like most of these fans think or experts think u should rhyme

he rhymed correctly he was technically proficient and technically sound and rhyme alot of syllables per bar and the shyt made sense


[Verse 3: 2Pac]
It wouldn't be L.A. without Mexicans
Black love, brown pride and the sets again
Pete Wilson trying to see us all broke
I'm on some bullshyt out for everything they owe
Remember K-day?
Weekends, Crenshaw, MLK?
Automatics rang free, nikkas lost they way
Gang signs being shown, nikka, love your hood!
But recognize and it's all good
Where the weed at?
nikkas gettin' shurrmed out
Snoop Dogg in this muthafukka permed out
M.O.B, Big Suge in the Lo-Lo, bounce and turn
Dogg Pound in the Lex with a ounce to burn
Got them Watts nikkas with me, O.F.T.B
They got some hash, took the stash, left the rest for me
Neckbone, Tre, Herron, Big Buntry too
Big Rock got knocked, but this one's for you
I hit the studio and drop a jewel, hoping it pay
Getting high, watching time fly: to live and die in LA
Let my angel sing
 
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do you appreciate anything that's not two decades old?
Why don't you get with the times and talk about something current?
 

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well pac actually rhymed syllables not words or phrases like most of these fans think or experts think u should rhyme

he rhymed correctly he was technically proficient and technically sound and rhyme alot of syllables per bar and the shyt made sense


[Verse 3: 2Pac]
It wouldn't be L.A. without Mexicans
Black love, brown pride and the sets again
Pete Wilson trying to see us all broke
I'm on some bullshyt out for everything they owe
Remember K-day?
Weekends, Crenshaw, MLK?
Automatics rang free, nikkas lost they way
Gang signs being shown, nikka, love your hood!
But recognize and it's all good
Where the weed at?
nikkas gettin' shurrmed out
Snoop Dogg in this muthafukka permed out
M.O.B, Big Suge in the Lo-Lo, bounce and turn
Dogg Pound in the Lex with a ounce to burn
Got them Watts nikkas with me, O.F.T.B
They got some hash, took the stash, left the rest for me
Neckbone, Tre, Herron, Big Buntry too
Big Rock got knocked, but this one's for you
I hit the studio and drop a jewel, hoping it pay
Getting high, watching time fly: to live and die in LA
Let my angel sing

:pachaha:Hell yea. I always liked his showmanship on tracks. Nobody had a artistic presence like pac
 
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