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here is this requirement

the bar measure has to be perfect where the rhymes matches on the bars

syllable count near perfect or perfect cadence various tempos etc

pac verse on bomb first
 

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the bomb first instrumental isn't even on beat with itself breh
 

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I'm serious ... the little water drop effect and the various percussion isn't all aligned with itself... Pac is certainly not aligned with it in his ranting verse

breh most definitely disagree with this the syllable count his perfect

and the rhythm tempo pronouncation enuncation and the rhymes match up perfect in terms on the kick and snare imo

tell me imo what is a perfect verse
 

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Big Pun - this n!gga reads like an advanced textcee

You can catch me in the cherry red one-fifty
Got the grizzy locked in the stizzy
Pop the clizzy goin sixty down a one-wizzy
Drunk pissy, tryin to cruise through the avenue
While my peoples is poppin bottles up in ?Sue's rendevous?
fukk that, spun the U-ey lost a hubcap
It's back to the shack - came back and now, "What's that?"
Straight from Paris, checkin Gaby's new baby carriage
Perry Ellis (nice), auburn cherry reddish
Fresh out the dealer, got the Tec for the squealers
Wear a vest for the killers, nuttin less cause it's reala
in the Big Apple, where it's quick to get your shyt tackled
Enemies spit at you, best friends kidnap you
Trust no one (eh eh) got beef bust yo' gun
You don't need no one (nope) talkin bout that you owe him
I'ma go for dolo - Scarface without Manolo
One deep, I be solo, bustin heat, throwin bolos, it's hard
 

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breh most definitely disagree with this the syllable count his perfect

and the rhythm tempo pronouncation enuncation and the rhymes match up perfect in terms on the kick and snare imo

tell me imo what is a perfect verse

I kinda reject the standards you posted there, syllable count and cadence etc is not for hip hop, because people use their voice instead of rhythm
 
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Big Pun or G Rap are the most tech. I'm too lazy to go and find an example.

i'd put slim shady in there but he made that song hatin on my black queens so i can no longer condone/support anything that he does.
 
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