My New Track Who Am I.. want honest opinions etc..

[NYCDaFuture]

https://soundcloud.com/nycdafuture

Jus did da Who Am I track today. would like honest opinions and how to get better. I also got other tracks on there so let me know how to improve etc. Good Looks..

 

[DBR]

link dosnt work for me.

 

[NYCDaFuture]

yea my fault lol


https://soundcloud.com/nycdafuture

 

[BlackDroog]

My First piece of advice would be to link to your actual soundcloud page.

just messing with you. but seriously...we need the link to your profile page. not the stream.

Peace.

 

[NYCDaFuture]

yup jus did dat lol.. good looks

 

[TEKBEATZ]

https://soundcloud.com/nycdafuture

Jus did da Who Am I track today. would like honest opinions and how to get better. I also got other tracks on there so let me know how to improve etc. Good Looks..

I like it maybe we can do some work together

 

[BlackDroog]

I haven't rapped since 2001, but I would recommend you slow down your flow some. so you fit your words into the bar and stay on the beat. sometimes it sounded like you were trying to cram too many words into the bar so you sped up the last few words of the line which made them not as clear.

Other than that....I think you have a good rap voice. and had some witty lines. "RIP Whitney Houston. You know Crack Kills"

work on the flow and you will be nice.

 

[NYCDaFuture]

I like it maybe we can do some work together

Def fam.. would def do a collab just let me know whenever u want to..

 

[NYCDaFuture]

I haven't rapped since 2001, but I would recommend you slow down your flow some. so you fit your words into the bar and stay on the beat. sometimes it sounded like you were trying to cram too many words into the bar so you sped up the last few words of the line which made them not as clear.

Other than that....I think you have a good rap voice. and had some witty lines. "RIP Whitney Houston. You know Crack Kills"

work on the flow and you will be nice.

Good looks.. yea i def have to fix my flow alot and stay on beat more.. I just been debatin if i should go harder at ball or this cuz I love both. I just have to get more motivated to get better cuz Once I do its a wrap..

 

[TEKBEATZ]

Kinda remind me of Roc Marciano PM your email addy.

 

[DBR]

That was dope for real got potential

 

[BlackDroog]

Good looks.. yea i def have to fix my flow alot and stay on beat more.. I just been debatin if i should go harder at ball or this cuz I love both. I just have to get more motivated to get better cuz Once I do its a wrap..

do BOTH!. Cross a dude up, dunk on him then go home and record a song about his broken ankles.

Also check out my soundcloud and bandcamp (in the signature) hit me if you want to use any of my beats.

 

[NYCDaFuture]

^^ Damn I aint kno there were talented producers on here real talk, def feelin urs n Tek beats.. Def Tough n good looks DBR I def will put more work into gettin alot better..

 

[chandlerj]

You sound just like Diz Gibran