My Video is on vlad tv

Akademiks

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decent song. simplistic rhyme pattern. good hook. .. horrible video .. as in the concept of the video. good quality .. but for the type of song u could have had a better concept video other than half the vid standing and staring at each other in a record store.

ur feature .. is poppin .. got that early cam sound. not bad.

my advice: scrap ur verses. keep ur hook & feature. switch up ur flow. and keep in mind its a chick song. or ur tryna appeal to females
 
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