Need constructive critism for this beat

[BrothaZay]

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[Deafheaven]

sounds like a good start. I would just add some more pizzazz and make those kicks a lil warmer. good shyt tho.

 

[KushSkywalker]

sounds pretty cool, i would just try to mix the snare more on top of the beat.

 

[LauderdaleBoss]

nice lil chill beat, good vibe going. Prolly could do more with the drums like changing up the patterns a lil bit at certain spots but for the most part the beat is on point.

Tight work tho

 

[BlackDroog]

I like that atmospheric synth sound in the background. dope beat Zay...


Even though you didn't ask me for feedback

 

[Tom Foolery]

Great vibe. I'd probably put a synth melody in chorus.