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Wrote this in 4 hours last night. Recorded 2 hours ago.
Feedback positive or negative will be dapped/repped.

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LYRICS:




HOOK:


45 by my gut...nikka, that's just how I do, thangs...
Got some killas in the cut...throwing Bs, like they Wu-Tang...
My Crip nikkas know wassup...So muthafukk the games that you...play...
And if u ever fukk wit us...whole team shootin like it's 2K.


VERSE ONE:


Fresh up outta, in the joint...They shoulda never let me out, nikka...
Don'tcha know my momma from Detroit...Boy, I'll put the Piston in ya mouth, nikka...
Ima take ya shorty if you doubt, nikka. Might Derek Fisher wit ya spouse, nikka...
Like Django, mixed wit James Jones, I'm on the King throne, and you a house nikka.
I be 2Kin, wit them 2 Ks...Take a shot and make the play die.
I'll send them shooters where u stay...Just say you got the shyt on Gamefly.
I tell them acting nikkas "Take Two"...fukk me? And I'ma pay you.
Shots at ya line-up, for reachin, nikka?...Those free, & you can take two.
Aaaah trey pound, that's a K.D....Pray to God, and that's A.V.
Free Bobby Shmurda, shout to Dave East. Locs got (next) Nets like Jay-Z.
Looka, looka, looka look at me now...My free shooters out in Brooklyn be foul.
Haters hatin like it's good to be down...Dwight Howard, p*ssy, look at me smile.



HOOK:


45 by my gut...nikka, that's just how I do, thangs...
Got some killas in the cut...throwing Bs, like they Wu-Tang...
My Crip nikkas know wassup...So muthafukk the games that you...play...
And if u ever fukk wit us...whole team shootin like it's 2K.


Bow, bow....bytch...I be gun walkin when I hold the heater.
Might run up on you wit them sticks...And I ain't talkin no controller either.
Need to circle your block, to flex... And shoot a square, just for talkin foul...
Then pass the burner to my ex (X)...If I P-O-P, she gon hold it down...


VERSE TWO:


I'ma Knicks fan, but for 6 bands...I'll Leave ya body where the Cavs play.
Have ya whole squad dressed in black...Your youngins looking like it's Draft Day.
Your stash? I can't wait to Rob it & Horry ya. Shootout in Flatbush, you'll drown in Astoria.
Feds had you singing & shouting like Gloria. Shut the fukk up & go out like a Warrior.
Klay thompson wit the grey Thompson. Draymond Green, the way I play wit teams...
Barbosa, out the large toaster...Them rounds burst, long range, in 3s.
Like bow, bow, bow...Feeling like I'm near fever, you a scared diva.
Boy, I let my shorty whip the yay yay...And she danced on it like a cheerleader
Only got 4 bars, for you local fukks. Flexin online, dumb nikkas, loadin up.
Lay low, can't let the Feds know too much. I mean God, we all sinners (centers), but you POST too much.
I'd rather get ejected thenna grow old in cuffs. nikka muthafukk 12, (Stockton) I'm Malone (alone) enough.
You playing Westbrook, wit ya best look...But this Tony Allen, gotcha cha vest shook.


HOOK




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this is extremely well written. the wordplay is next level. goat mixture of metaphors and play on how words sound/look. i like the NBA 2k thing. you got a good amount of intricate bars that only people paying attention would get, which i fukk with.
 

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this is extremely well written. the wordplay is next level. goat mixture of metaphors and play on how words sound/look. i like the NBA 2k thing. you got a good amount of intricate bars that only people paying attention would get, which i fukk with.


Thanks for noticing :mjcry:
 

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Cool concept, good timing with the playoffs in full swing right now too. The 2nd stanza of the hook seemed a little forced to fit the concept, the flow felt off and the wordplay wasn't as slick as the 1st stanza. A couple of the lines in the verses felt forced also, that Gamefly line was weak compared to the other lines. Other than that though it was cool, the beat was solid and you did your thing. :salute:
 

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Cool concept, good timing with the playoffs in full swing right now too. The 2nd stanza of the hook seemed a little forced to fit the concept, the flow felt off and the wordplay wasn't as slick as the 1st stanza. A couple of the lines in the verses felt forced also, that Gamefly line was weak compared to the other lines. Other than that though it was cool, the beat was solid and you did your thing. :salute:

Facts. Can you beat me in a fistfight, bangout, or bar for bar tho :patrice:
 

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:whoo: damn my nikka can't lie this is some next level shyt

your flow is natural and smooth as fukk

if this is just a freebie you better be cooking up a fire mixtape

i really hope you get it to the right people

if you have a manager he better be on his shyt or fire that nikka, all them fufu bloggers, e-dj's, and pay $200 to host a mixtape nikkas aint shyt :camby:

get it to the people hosting shows and really out here doing shyt

keep working fam :salute:
 

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and with how good you are structuring a song

i'd advise looking into some slightly more boom bappy beats

like bas's mixtapes. its hard beats but letting the drums breathe

trap nikkas aint tryna hear all that and heads don't fukks with extra tight 808 heavy beats

pick and choose the content with the beat

this was cool... just saying for the future
 

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and with how good you are structuring a song

i'd advise looking into some slightly more boom bappy beats

like bas's mixtapes. its hard beats but letting the drums breathe

trap nikkas aint tryna hear all that and heads don't fukks with extra tight 808 heavy beats

pick and choose the content with the beat

this was cool... just saying for the future



The singles are just that. Singles. They all serve a purpose. I'm good on beats, you'll see when shyt drops. Definitely have some boom bap on the album. :obama:


And as far as the "picking a beat for the concept" line, I'ma always go left, my nikka. I make my own lanes. If I wanna make a joint hippity hip hop heads, melody chasers, and street nikkas can all fukk wit, just to show how mean my pen is, I'ma do that, little nikka. :ufdup:



I put all of 8 hours into this song. From writing, to beat selection, to beat editing, mixing & mastering (mostly done by myself), recording and the engineers work...8 hours. Imagine what I could do in Drizzy tents :mjcry:



When is the last time you heard a concept song with wordplay, quotables, melodies, punchlines, flow switches, humor, coming from a credible artist? Go head, I'll wait. :patrice:



Fact of the matter is, I'm cooking up something special. This was all planned last summer in Camden County Jail, NJ. Now a nikka done bailed out wit 17k on chopper charges, linked up with Money & Violence, VH1, a few up and coming ventures that'll be profitable, preforming in NYC every other week, and fighting the gun case while on the run from another in a different state.




I can't relate to nikkas wit certifications and high paying, low-risk lifestyles. But more power to y'all; I'm just doing my thing. :banderas:


#BlackExcellence #TheAVLP: #ImMAYOR (#IgnoreMyMusicAtYourOwnRisk) JULY 1ST :wow:
 

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How are you mixing your vocals/songs?

I produce a bit and engineer myself. I keep poppin in ya threads, pretty damn impressed. Great structure and ya floating on the beat. Flow is pretty :salute: Not to mention your mixes are always clean and vocals sit right in the pocket. Sounding more and more ready for an album.

I've always had trouble mixing rap vocals on top of a 2-track instrumental that isn't tracked out ( which is why I thought it'd be dope if you can let us know).
 

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How are you mixing your vocals/songs?

I produce a bit and engineer myself. I keep poppin in ya threads, pretty damn impressed. Great structure and ya floating on the beat. Flow is pretty :salute: Not to mention your mixes are always clean and vocals sit right in the pocket. Sounding more and more ready for an album.

I've always had trouble mixing rap vocals on top of a 2-track instrumental that isn't tracked out ( which is why I thought it'd be dope if you can let us know).



Good looking my g. & I swear fam, as far as discussing mixing techniques go, I'd tell you, but then...






































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