Please critique this beat

[Young/Nacho\Drawz]

Song order: Intro > verse > chorus > verse > chorus > outro
My vision for this track is rap verses then a r+b chorus.

 

[SymbolicOne09]

its different, the drums.where fresh..... i wanna say something needs to be changed with the sounds of those strings TBH from (0-1:00) but after you go to the break they sound on point....

i fools wit it...

ill give a more depth listen when i am at home wit the monitors.

 

[Why-Fi]

the link is effd up

 

[Young/Nacho\Drawz]

Here is the direct link.
Thanks for the feedback thus far.

 

[KillSpray]

Yo keep it up breh, I'd look into a little music theory to clean up some of the out of key notes, but the vision is there.

 

[Young/Nacho\Drawz]

Yo keep it up breh, I'd look into a little music theory to clean up some of the out of key notes, but the vision is there.

This is a serious thread, I don't have time to play with you and rehash the music theory argument. If you hear something specific that you feel is out holla back and I'll straighten it up. Sorry you got your feeling's hurt in that thread so much that decided to retaliate here by mentioning it again.

 

[KillSpray]

This is a serious thread, I don't have time to play with you and rehash the music theory argument. If you hear something specific that you feel is out holla back and I'll straighten it up. Sorry you got your feeling's hurt in that thread so much that decided to retaliate here by mentioning it again.

 

[D1renegade]

I can't see anyone rapping over this track tbh. It needs a stronger melody in my opinion.. This could be good for background music in a video game tho...

 

[Why-Fi]

nice mix on the drums but the music really is off key. and the samples are too loud

 

[nineteeneightysix]

(1) The strings were point, and the sampling/composition was on point...

(2) The melodic part sounds "dark" to me...So, I can't hear a "RnB" chorus on this beat, unless it is Lauryn Hill, Erikah Badu or Mary J Blige singing something dark and sad...

(3) Try different drums...The way I am hearing the song, those drums are not enhancing the melody...I would use some heavily compressed drums with a snappy loud snare...

 

[Young/Nacho\Drawz]

I'm going to delete this beat and put some more work in on it but I need more feedback first. Holla!

 

[that_boy_kilso]

this is different, but i can dig it... drums are kinda thin...

im not a big fan of these strings... but the over all is nice...

keep it up!

 

[KillSpray]

This is a serious thread, I don't have time to play with you and rehash the music theory argument. If you hear something specific that you feel is out holla back and I'll straighten it up. Sorry you got your feeling's hurt in that thread so much that decided to retaliate here by mentioning it again.

This cat just negged me for giving him constructive feedback

Talk about projection

 

[Young/Nacho\Drawz]

This cat just negged me for giving him constructive feedback

Talk about projection

lol who are you talking to? cats get negative reps everyday b but they don't cry about. No, I gave you that for trying to rehash the musical theory debate but keep playing to the crowd, maybe you'll get some support. Don't try to spin this into I'm mad at negative feedback because if it were true others would have gotten the same in this thread or any others that i've posted in. Nor would I have given them daps for their "constructive feedback". Nice try though b!tch.

 

[Myrical Lyfe]