Pop203 on NAS's "Stay" instrumental... Check it out.

[CapFromMCU]

and Wayne's sh!t.

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9ADdfsZthqg"]"Stay" - K Pryme - YouTube[/ame]

 

[JasonSJackson]

that first verse was tuff.......u just need to start it smoother.....

 

[CapFromMCU]

that first verse was tuff.......u just need to start it smoother.....

i think i know what you sayin, ha. salute my nig

 

[humble Hermit]

Not bad. pretty good. For some reason I thought you were deep in your 30's tho

 

[CapFromMCU]

Not bad. pretty good. For some reason I thought you were deep in your 30's tho

why??? lol. 1983 my n!g, birthday in 2 weeks. but thanks tho

 

[Guess Who]

dog, you got the voice for this shyt

secondly, the lyrics in the first verse were wicked...I just think you gotta slow down your flow a tad...your timing is a little early...treat your flow like it's fine wine...sip that shyt slowly, it's not a shot that you throw back quickly...give the listener a chance to keep up with you...

...you're nice though. Keep it up.

 

[humble Hermit]

why??? lol. 1983 my n!g, birthday in 2 weeks. but thanks tho

Seem like a ol nikka that hung out with Jungle and ill Will

But lik everyone said, you got a good flow and voice. I'd listen to your shyt cause it's more my speed anyways..if you had a tape out.

 

[CapFromMCU]

dog, you got the voice for this shyt

secondly, the lyrics in the first verse were wicked...I just think you gotta slow down your flow a tad...your timing is a little early...treat your flow like it's fine wine...sip that shyt slowly, it's not a shot that you throw back quickly...give the listener a chance to keep up with you...

...you're nice though. Keep it up.

love my n!gga, appreciated.

 

[A.V.]

dog, you got the voice for this shyt

secondly, the lyrics in the first verse were wicked...I just think you gotta slow down your flow a tad...your timing is a little early...treat your flow like it's fine wine...sip that shyt slowly, it's not a shot that you throw back quickly...give the listener a chance to keep up with you...

...you're nice though. Keep it up.

I don't really pay attention to nikkas or even give they shyts a listen, but I fukks wit "Stay" tough and I knew if a nikka went over it, he had to be talkin bout SOMETHIN...

I agree with the quoted. Just smooth the flow out around the edges a little for a track like this, pace urself a little bit better and you be iight. I fukk with how you brought the first verse in, the first 2 bars.

:salte: Keep doin you Sun.

 

[CapFromMCU]

I don't really pay attention to nikkas or even give they shyts a listen, but I fukks wit "Stay" tough and I knew if a nikka went over it, he had to be talkin bout SOMETHIN...

I agree with the quoted. Just smooth the flow out around the edges a little for a track like this, pace urself a little bit better and you be iight. I fukk with how you brought the first verse in, the first 2 bars.

:salte: Keep doin you Sun.