post some ill multisyllable rhymes

[the rhyme king]

we was already loyal to people's minds and mulianis
now we more fukked up with a mayor named Guliani
you can try to bomb me
analyze but can't define me
my mind's divine heavily entwined with Ghandi's
far from feeble, I leave your nostrils hard to breathe through
cause my cerebral's are more of a higher plane
than the Hebrews
my mic devotion brings out my deepest emotions
overdosing wannabes posing
sending them through convulsions
to hard to follow, you took a bite but couldn't swallow
your mind's boggled
but I'm as deep as Donald Goines novels
my whole persona's kinda laid back like a recliner
and since my minor, I been fukking with marijuana
wavy-haired, my skin got a money getting glare
strictly menace wear, macking offa Guinness beer
so where it all begins is here
destiny and me finally meet
so how can I be weak?
I'm rather unique



im going to start this thread by posting this az verse

he got some of the illest multis ever imo next to eminem and kool g rap

and for those that don't what multis here is what they are

it is bascially rhyming more then one syllable that actually rhyme and not rhyming the same word
so instead of cat and hat u rhyme i hat my track.


Normal rhyme: cat / hat
Multi rhyme: my cat / hi-hat
Or a longer multi: bit my cat / hit the hi-hat

 

[JAY?]

Yo yo
I met this wet ho ho
Who blew my set like a mo Jo
In an inn in front of the steps of a sto' do'
Bet
Let it go bro
Jet
You za ho mo
Gillette
Cuz I got dough though
Fresh like flesh but in slow mo

 

[the cac mamba]

[11:36] cllmemayb14: sup?!
[11:36] juelzenclade20: wuts up? Who is this
[11:36] cllmemayb14: i want 2 talk about rhyme schemes. Im a girl is that ok? Lol
[11:36] juelzenclade20: yeah that cool
I never had a girl aim me bout rhyme schemes bfore
[11:36] cllmemayb14: :-)
[11:37] cllmemayb14: so whats a rhyme scheme? I want to start writing rhymes
[11:37] juelzenclade20: ok r u rally 14?
[11:39] cllmemayb14: ya lol
[11:39] juelzenclade20: wher r u from?
[11:40] juelzenclade20: im from dallas
[11:41] cllmemayb14: no way! Im from arlington! Thats super close !! :-0
[11:42] juelzenclade20: yeah do u hav a bf?
[11:42] juelzenclade20: boyfriend?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: nope! Whats a multi?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: do multis mean multi syllables?
[11:43] juelzenclade20: yeah
[11:44] juelzenclade20: can u send me a pic of yur face?
[11:44] cllmemayb14: can we just meet up one day soon? Since we're close 2 each other and discuss rhyme schemes? ;-)
[11:45] juelzenclade20: yeah most def wutz ur name?
[11:45] cllmemayb14: rachel
[11:46] cllmemayb14: whats urs
[11:48] juelzenclade20: ron
[11:48] cllmemayb14: r and r lol ;-)
[11:48] cllmemayb14: i can have my mom drop me off at the valley view tomorro nite about 6.
[11:49] juelzenclade20: i'll b ther
[11:49] cllmemayb14: ok wht do u look like? Im biracial 5'5 106 big hips n big t*ts lol I'll be sitting outside the theatre. I'll wear a pink shirt, pink snapback and short jean shorts ;-)
[11:49] juelzenclade20: black 5'6 n muscle stocky build. Imma wear a blue mavericks snapback n blue shirt
[11:50] juelzenclade20: itz only gone be u rigt?
[11:50] cllmemayb14: ya!
[11:50] cllmemayb14: bring a condom, or 2! ;-)
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:51] cllmemayb14: do u hv ur own place?
[11:51] cllmemayb14: how old r u
[11:51] juelzenclade20: my mom live wit me but i got the whole basement 2 myself wit my own door.
[11:51] juelzenclade20: im 17
[11:51] cllmemayb14: awesomeness!!
[11:51] cllmemayb14: we can go there after the movies
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:52] cllmemayb14: ahahaha sike u fukkin pervert im exposin you to everybody on all the messageboards ronnie u fukkin molester ahaha
[11:52] cllmemayb14: coli, sohh, rapmusic allhiphop and boxden u fakkit
[11:52] cllmemayb14: retarded pervert
[11:57] juelzenclade20: please dont i wus just jokin i knew that wasnt a girl

 

[razassin]

[11:36] cllmemayb14: sup?!
[11:36] juelzenclade20: wuts up? Who is this
[11:36] cllmemayb14: i want 2 talk about rhyme schemes. Im a girl is that ok? Lol
[11:36] juelzenclade20: yeah that cool
I never had a girl aim me bout rhyme schemes bfore
[11:36] cllmemayb14: :-)
[11:37] cllmemayb14: so whats a rhyme scheme? I want to start writing rhymes
[11:37] juelzenclade20: ok r u rally 14?
[11:39] cllmemayb14: ya lol
[11:39] juelzenclade20: wher r u from?
[11:40] juelzenclade20: im from dallas
[11:41] cllmemayb14: no way! Im from arlington! Thats super close !! :-0
[11:42] juelzenclade20: yeah do u hav a bf?
[11:42] juelzenclade20: boyfriend?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: nope! Whats a multi?
[11:43] cllmemayb14: do multis mean multi syllables?
[11:43] juelzenclade20: yeah
[11:44] juelzenclade20: can u send me a pic of yur face?
[11:44] cllmemayb14: can we just meet up one day soon? Since we're close 2 each other and discuss rhyme schemes? ;-)
[11:45] juelzenclade20: yeah most def wutz ur name?
[11:45] cllmemayb14: rachel
[11:46] cllmemayb14: whats urs
[11:48] juelzenclade20: ron
[11:48] cllmemayb14: r and r lol ;-)
[11:48] cllmemayb14: i can have my mom drop me off at the valley view tomorro nite about 6.
[11:49] juelzenclade20: i'll b ther
[11:49] cllmemayb14: ok wht do u look like? Im biracial 5'5 106 big hips n big t*ts lol I'll be sitting outside the theatre. I'll wear a pink shirt, pink snapback and short jean shorts ;-)
[11:49] juelzenclade20: black 5'6 n muscle stocky build. Imma wear a blue mavericks snapback n blue shirt
[11:50] juelzenclade20: itz only gone be u rigt?
[11:50] cllmemayb14: ya!
[11:50] cllmemayb14: bring a condom, or 2! ;-)
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:51] cllmemayb14: do u hv ur own place?
[11:51] cllmemayb14: how old r u
[11:51] juelzenclade20: my mom live wit me but i got the whole basement 2 myself wit my own door.
[11:51] juelzenclade20: im 17
[11:51] cllmemayb14: awesomeness!!
[11:51] cllmemayb14: we can go there after the movies
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:52] cllmemayb14: ahahaha sike u fukkin pervert im exposin you to everybody on all the messageboards ronnie u fukkin molester ahaha
[11:52] cllmemayb14: coli, sohh, rapmusic allhiphop and boxden u fakkit
[11:52] cllmemayb14: retarded pervert
[11:57] juelzenclade20: please dont i wus just jokin i knew that wasnt a girl

This shyt always gets me...

@Therhymeking... I see you always tryina bold multi's in certain threads when quotin' songs, but you always fail... would you like some help on what's multisyllabel rhymin'?

 

[the rhyme king]

This shyt always gets me...

@Therhymeking... I see you always tryina bold multi's in certain threads when quotin' songs, but you always fail... would you like some help on what's multisyllabel rhymin'?

yes show me.

 

[Oroko Saki]

After a crime im like Ronnie's hairline, I recede quick
Mods, please delete this



run hard, redneck
one star, neg rep

 

[AkaDemiK]

When I rap they say I'm radical but rapping don't do it
I can clap you in the clavicle to classical music

- Apathy


don't give yourself an aneurysm trying to bold that one rhyme king..

 

[JayBaldacci]

Stupid jewish foolish cupid truest music

 

[JayBaldacci]

rapid plastic traffic habits tragic

 

[razassin]

we was already loyal to people's minds and mulianis
now we more fukked up with a mayor named Guliani
you can try to bomb me
analyze but can't define me
my mind's divine heavily entwined with Ghandi's
far from feeble, I leave your nostrils hard to breathe through
cause my cerebral's are more of a higher plane
than the Hebrews
my mic devotion brings out my deepest emotions
overdosing wannabes posing
sending them through convulsions
to hard to follow, you took a bite but couldn't swallow
your mind's boggled
but I'm as deep as Donald Goines novels
my whole persona's kinda laid back like a recliner
and since my minor, I been fukking with marijuana
wavy-haired, my skin got a money getting glare
strictly menace wear, macking offa Guinness beer
so where it all begins is here
destiny and me finally meet
so how can I be weak?
I'm rather unique



im going to start this thread by posting this az verse

he got some of the illest multis ever imo next to eminem and kool g rap

and for those that don't what multis here is what they are

it is bascially rhyming more then one syllable that actually rhyme and not rhyming the same word
so instead of cat and hat u rhyme i hat my track.


Normal rhyme: cat / hat
Multi rhyme: my cat / hi-hat
Or a longer multi: bit my cat / hit the hi-hat

Im quotin' you to show you where you are wrong. I'm seriously not tryin' to shyt on you or anything like that nikka...

The example you give of a normal rhyme is correct... I would call it a simple rhyme since you only rhymin' ONE WORD and its always the LAST WORD of the bar.

NOW MULTI'S be referrin' to rhymin' TWO OR MORE SYLLABLES.

You give the example of ''my cat/my hat'' which is right. But that last example you give is not right.

Why? cause you are not countin' the syllable numbers right nukka...

bit my cat (3 syllables)
hit the high-hat (4 syllables)



When you talk about multisyllable rhymin' you actually gotta count from the first to the last syllable you gonna rhyme... and the syllabel number got to match in every bar or you fukkin' up, ya feel me?

Example:

load my gun up when shyt HITS THE FAN (3 syllables)
You better be packin' or get WITH THE PLAN (3 syllables)

The most important syllables to rhyme are always the first and the last... and don't forget to always count... one yaself fool

 

[the rhyme king]

When I rap they say I'm radical but rapping don't do it
I can clap you in the clavicle to classical music

- Apathy


don't give yourself an aneurysm trying to bold that one rhyme king..

lol the only multis in those lines are these

radical clavicle that's it
and that is some three syllable shyt if u considered that a multi .....

then lord help you lmao

these are multis kid

Yo I come in the form of danger lurking

blasting a mag strange and murkin

shot exchanges from out the ranges and suburbans


- Kool G Rap

 

[the rhyme king]

Im quotin' you to show you where you are wrong. I'm seriously not tryin' to shyt on you or anything like that nikka...

The example you give of a normal rhyme is correct... I would call it a simple rhyme since you only rhymin' ONE WORD and its always the LAST WORD of the bar.

NOW MULTI'S be referrin' to rhymin' TWO OR MORE SYLLABLES.

You give the example of ''my cat/my hat'' which is right. But that last example you give is not right.

Why? cause you are not countin' the syllable numbers right nukka...

bit my cat (3 syllables)
hit the high-hat (4 syllables)



When you talk about multisyllable rhymin' you actually gotta count from the first to the last syllable you gonna rhyme... and the syllabel number got to match in every bar or you fukkin' up, ya feel me?

Example:

load my gun up when shyt HITS THE FAN (3 syllables)
You better be packin' or get WITH THE PLAN (3 syllables)

The most important syllables to rhyme are always the first and the last... and don't forget to always count... one yaself fool

ok from my understanding would these be multis

yo I come in the form of danger lurking 4 syllables
blasting a mag strange and murkin 4 syllables

 

[USSInsiders]

I slap box fat cocks
ignite blocks witta matchbox
Put a red dot on ya rotted carotid artery
My semen's accurate, connect dots wit' the archery
After slurping my dikk it's like a big slime thing
Unscroll whole bowls of bold lines for the rhyme king

 

[razassin]

Yo I come in the form of danger lurking

blasting a mag strange and murkin

shot exchanges from out the ranges and suburbans


- Kool G Rap

Count the number of syllables nikka....

DANG-er LURKIN' (4 syllables)

STRANGE and MURKIN' (4 syllables) ....Notice in these two bars the first and the two last syllables rhyme, but with that last bar the syllabels don't rhyme except the last two.

RANGES and SUBURBANS (6 syllables)

 

[Oroko Saki]

lol the only multis in those lines are these

radical clavicle that's it
and that is some three syllable shyt if u considered that a multi .....

then lord help you lmao

these are multis kid

Yo I come in the form of danger lurking

blasting a mag strange and murkin

shot exchanges from out the ranges and suburbans


- Kool G Rap

Going back to this...

When I rap they say I'm radical but rapping don't do it
I can clap you in the clavicle to classical music

you said only radical and clavicle rhyme but what about classical?

And what about "do it" and "music"

Also...

rap
radical
rapping
clap
clavicle
classicle

are all one syllable rhymes to add to the complexity of these lines

But your here laughing at my fellow Nasir stan Akademik. Looks like you got some brushing up to do on your multi syllable detecting skills

Serious question though, would those one syllable lines count as multisyllable rhymes since theres 6 one syllable rhymes within 2 lines?

I think the answer is yes because Kool G Rap especially when he was younger would rhyme one syllable several times throughout a line, Rakim also did this. Probably most rappers have used this rhyme structure at times

For example

Ill pick up my pen and leave inc on your chin
my rhymes come from within, in a battle i always win

Thats not meant to be creative, just a basic example of what im asking