the line. First of all, we can take out the phrase “plus
you know” from line two. That phrase is a filler anyway,
and all it does is hurt the flow. That’s 3 syllables gone,
but I want to get rid of 1 more. So I’ll change “the
candy aisle” to “candy aisles,” which gets rid of that
extra syllable. Now we’ve got:
My lyrics so good, God’s reading them in heaven,
I got more bars then candy aisles in 7/11
It’s much better. Line one has 14 syllables. Line two
has 14 syllables. The flow is much smoother. Whether
they’re conscious of it or not, lots of pro rappers keep
their syllable counts the same from line to line. Here’s
an example from Chamillionaire’s “Riding Dirty,” a big
single in 2006. Chamillionaire, a talented Houston
rapper and teenage friend of Paul Wall, rose to national
fame when Houston took over the hip-hop world in late
2005. Dubbed the “Mixtape Messiah,” Chamillionaire
made a name for himself with his deep, versatile voice
and lyrical agility.
Line # of syllables
Houston Texas, you can check my tags
9
pull me over try to check my slab
9
glove compartment gotta get my cash
9
cause the crooked cops try to come up fast
In these bars, Chamillionaire uses the same syllables
4. Rhyme Scheme
Where in the line you rhyme has a lot to do with how
you flow it. For that reason, a tight rhyme scheme will
always help out your flow. For beginners: keep your
rhymes on the 4
th beat of each measure (the second
snare hit in most songs). Make sure that you’re
dropping a rhyme every-other time that snare hits.
For more advanced rappers: use the in-rhyme and
multi-rhyme lessons to switch up your rhymes. You
can also take the rhymes off of the 4
th beat, and move
them elsewhere in the bar