Rate My Verse

[Looty]

Looking for some ears, this song was made last year, from by nikka's mixtape. I'm the second nikka rapping, it's one of my favorite verses I did. Love this song man. Constructive criticism is much appreciated.enjoy brehs

http://tindeck.com/listen/bifb

 

[Looty]

Don't let this thread die on me my fellow brethren

 

[Looty]

any takers?

 

[Looty]

YALL GONNA LISTEN TO THIS shyt OR shyt BOUT TO GET REAL

 

[Zach Lowe]

Song is trash

Weren't you saying bad things about Vado earlier

 

[Looty]

who the fukk is Vado? And why are you trolling?

 

[Zach Lowe]

Nvm you were playing down J.R. Writer's Kendrick response cuz it was too "typical Dipset" for you

Still don't like the song tho

 

[BastardChild]

1 star like this thread

 

[Looty]

So yall don't have any constructive criticism...

fair enough. I see the light now

 

[MINT]

hmm not bad

 

[MINT]

I'm sure you could do better though

 

[Kaypain]

Damn my brother nobody showing you love

But you already know I liked this verse when you told me, I told you I didn't like the hook, but Jones still decided to stick with it

 

[2manyFCKNrappers]

sounds like the average template every other rapper uses to make a verse. same content, cadence...

beat is weird

it's not good. and it's not bad. but it's not good.

 

[Kaypain]

"Sweet 16 so my cake bigger"

I see what you did there