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Looty

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Looking for some ears, this song was made last year, from by nikka's mixtape. I'm the second nikka rapping, it's one of my favorite verses I did. Love this song man. Constructive criticism is much appreciated.:salute:enjoy brehs

http://tindeck.com/listen/bifb

 

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YALL GONNA LISTEN TO THIS shyt OR shyt BOUT TO GET REAL
 

Zach Lowe

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Nvm you were playing down J.R. Writer's Kendrick response cuz it was too "typical Dipset" for you

Still don't like the song tho
 

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So yall don't have any constructive criticism...

:ehh: fair enough. I see the light now:salute:
 

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Damn my brother nobody showing you love :russ:

But you already know I liked this verse when you told me, I told you I didn't like the hook, but Jones still decided to stick with it :yeshrug:
 

2manyFCKNrappers

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sounds like the average template every other rapper uses to make a verse. same content, cadence...

beat is weird

it's not good. and it's not bad. but it's not good.
 

Kaypain

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"Sweet 16 so my cake bigger" :ehh:

I see what you did there
 
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