rough draft of my song....appreciate feedback

[shagnificent belafonte]

 

[NoChillJones]

Lyrics are good

Beat and your mic sucks...the vocals can be brought up...but that beat got to go breh....

 

[shagnificent belafonte]

Lyrics are good

Beat and your mic sucks...the vocals can be brought up...but that beat got to go breh....

The beat is that bad breh? Appreciate your honesty...I gotta pretty good mic I just suck at mixing...

....Apparently I suck at producing too

 

[NoChillJones]

The beat is that bad breh? Appreciate your honesty...I gotta pretty good mic I just suck at mixing...

....Apparently I suck at producing too

Lyrics are good though....

 

[Kisame]

THE beat wack but lyrics are nice work more on THE mixing and mastering producing just find a better beat or download better plug ins and drumkits

 

[shagnificent belafonte]

THE beat wack but lyrics are nice work more on THE mixing and mastering producing just find a better beat or download better plug ins and drumkits

Appreciate that breh...two for two the beat sux


I thought it was ok

 

[Kisame]

I feel you man gotta give My honest opinion remember there's Always room for improvement

 

[shagnificent belafonte]

I feel you man gotta give My honest opinion remember there's Always room for improvement

Hell yeah I really appreciate yall for taking the time...friends and fam will lie to not hurt feelings...thats y i put it here....yall gave me a fresh perspective and I thank yall for that brehs.....
i liked the beat tho...but after posting here i asked fam about it and they all gave that awkward pause before saying they liked it

 

[JoseLuisGotcha]

Less drums they are distracting and it's too fast for your cadence....strip it to keyboard maybe sub the drums for a guitar or something...also needs a very melodic hook from the girl