second verse on hail mary by pac is his best verse technically speaking

pointproven214

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Penitentiaries is packed with promise-makers
Never realize the precious time that bytch nikkas is wastin'
Institutionalized, I live my life a product made to crumble
But too hardened for a smile
We're too crazy to be humble; we ballin'
Catch me, father, please, ‘cause I'm fallin' in the liquor store
Pass the Hennessy, I hear you callin', can I get some more?
Hell, 'til I reach Hell, I ain't scared
Mama checkin' in my bedroom, I ain't there
I got a head with no screws in it, what can I do?
One life to live, but I got nothin' to lose
Just me and you on a one-way trip to prison, sellin' drugs
We all wrapped up in this livin', life as thugs
To my homeboys in Clinton Max doin' their bid
Raise hell to this real shyt and feel this
When they turn out the lights, I'll be there in the dark
Thuggin' eternal through my heart; now hail Mary, nikka!

in terms of meter the rhyme scheme etc


 

TheRtist

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Is this the Rhyme King alias?

You gotta do better when trying to fool people.

not long ago, I told my stalkers I had an alias, they took the bait, then I went and denied it again.

Then they all started apologizing to my alias.lol

PM me and I'll put you on game.
 
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