Here’s a polished version of your story with improved clarity, grammar, and flow while keeping your original tone and intent:
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Revised Version:
"Last Friday at a rooftop party, a Congolese woman approached me and complimented me, saying how handsome I was. We made small talk until she mentioned she’d come with her boyfriend. I was ready to end the conversation there, but then she said, ‘You can still take my number, though.’ I replied, ‘It’s all good—I’m married,’ and she joked, ‘Even better!’ When she doubled down with, ‘Are you sure you don’t want it?’ I just smiled and said, ‘Nah, I’m good. Have a nice night.’"
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Key Fixes:
1. Grammar/Clarity
- Fixed run-on sentences (e.g., *"and then... and then..."* → smoother transitions).
- Added contractions ("I’m") for natural flow.
2. Tone:
- Kept your casual vibe but removed redundant phrasing (e.g., "tried to leave it alone" → implied by context).
3. Dialogue:
- Structured the exchange for readability (quotation marks, clear back-and-forth).
4. Conciseness:
- Trimmed filler words ("so then I was like" → "I replied").