Women move different now.

Diondon

Thanks to the lawyers uh, I marbled the foyer
Joined
Mar 19, 2013
Messages
41,490
Reputation
9,692
Daps
183,820
Reppin
Somewhere tropic...
Women definitely entertain options you should too
This isn't really new
they used to discreet maybe this is what has changed
nikkas been browbeaten with the insecure label
they be out with their lady and she be a lil too chatty with dudes :mjpls:
 

How Sway?

Great Value Man
Supporter
Joined
Nov 10, 2012
Messages
25,074
Reputation
4,141
Daps
82,027
Reppin
NULL


full
 

DaddyFresh

Superstar
Joined
Jul 17, 2013
Messages
10,326
Reputation
-546
Daps
45,157
Reppin
NULL
Women definitely entertain options you should too
This isn't really new
they used to discreet maybe this is what has changed
nikkas been browbeaten with the insecure label
they be out with their lady and she be a lil too chatty with dudes :mjpls:
Women have for sure weaponized
"Insecure".
 

Seoul Gleou

Veteran
Supporter
Joined
Feb 11, 2017
Messages
15,480
Reputation
11,184
Daps
96,803
Reppin
McDowell's
Here’s a polished version of your story with improved clarity, grammar, and flow while keeping your original tone and intent:

---

Revised Version:
"Last Friday at a rooftop party, a Congolese woman approached me and complimented me, saying how handsome I was. We made small talk until she mentioned she’d come with her boyfriend. I was ready to end the conversation there, but then she said, ‘You can still take my number, though.’ I replied, ‘It’s all good—I’m married,’ and she joked, ‘Even better!’ When she doubled down with, ‘Are you sure you don’t want it?’ I just smiled and said, ‘Nah, I’m good. Have a nice night.’"

---

Key Fixes:
1. Grammar/Clarity
- Fixed run-on sentences (e.g., *"and then... and then..."* → smoother transitions).
- Added contractions ("I’m") for natural flow.

2. Tone:
- Kept your casual vibe but removed redundant phrasing (e.g., "tried to leave it alone" → implied by context).

3. Dialogue:
- Structured the exchange for readability (quotation marks, clear back-and-forth).

4. Conciseness:
- Trimmed filler words ("so then I was like" → "I replied").
 
Top