Breaking: One Of the Most "Perfectly Rhymed" Verses In Hiphop History

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Starts at 1:30. Every syllable is on point:wow:



With Everything we done been through, we done STOOD VICTORIOUS
came from rock bottom to each HOOD SUPPORTING US
I finally realized, we aint MAKE IT THIS FAR
to fall on our faces, tho MISTAKES IS JUST PART
of LIFE, what you DO, when you LIVE and you LEARN FROM IT
its TRIFE, but its TRUE, thats what it IS and it HURTS A BIT
But i was told to dust yaself off and TRY AGAIN
We earned every bit of this...excuse if I OFFEND
the LISTENERS
that's HEARING THIS
now lemme JUST SAY THIS
my partner that i love has gotten SICK where his BRAIN IS
And you aint know? We aint gotten USE TO THE CHANGES
before THAT
the CAT
that made the MUSIC ARRANGEMENTS
Dilla? Now when he left some THOUGHT WE WERE FINISHED:sadcam:
but haaaaa:russ: jokes on you....you wasn't SMART TO BEGIN WITH:umad:
Think i would let any incident BURN THE VILLAGE?
not a bad business move or a WORD FROM CRITICS
They hated on the album, but they wasn't READY FOR IT
Trinity, Detroit Deli....ima DEADLY POET:ufdup:
And i aint even get a quotable for WHAT IM SPITN
GUESS IT DEPENDS
on RECORD SPENDS

and how MUCH YOU SHIPPIN
to the MOM & POP, BEST BUYS & SAM GOODIES
when will the DRAMA STOP, and JUST WISE and HAND IT TO ME
for EVERY PERSON meant for GREAT THINGS GO THROUGH THIS
cuz HEAVY JERKIN is quick to SHAPE KINGS & MOLD RULERS:wow:
 
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in a sort of unrelated note, people say it was Masta Ace, but I feel like it was ELZHI that Eminem stole his Slim Shady era delivery style from. Everybody who's heard Em's first "Infinite" album knows he didnt' sound like that at first.

But at the same time, I really don't know the time frame that El and Em both started rapping, or what Detroit's underground scene was like.

All I know is....



:sas2:
 

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ive always loved this vid. Especially when he talks about MAINTAINING the conversation (in rhyme) while doing all these different rhyme patterns. Cats dont realize the talent it takes to rap about a subject and stay on topic WHILE utilizing different rhyming techniques. Thats why most of these wack ":rappers" can only utilize the basic 1-syllable at the end rhyme technique
 

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Starts at 1:30. Every syllable is on point:wow:



With Everything we done been through, we done STOOD VICTORIOUS
came from rock bottom to each HOOD SUPPORTING US
I finally realized, we aint MAKE IT THIS FAR
to fall on our faces, tho MISTAKES IS JUST PART
of LIFE, what you DO, when you LIVE and you LEARN FROM IT
its TRIFE, but its TRUE, thats what it is and it HURTS A BIT
But i was told to dust yaself off and TRY AGAIN
We earned every bit of this...excuse if I OFFEND
the LISTENERS
that's HEARING THIS
now lemme JUST SAY THIS
my partner that i love has gotten SICK where his BRAIN IS
And you aint know? We aint gotten USE TO THE CHANGES
before THAT
the CAT
that made the MUSIC ARRANGEMENTS
Dilla? Now when he left some THOUGHT WE WERE FINISHED:sadcam:
but haaaaa:russ: jokes on you....you wasn't SMART TO BEGIN WITH:umad:
Think i would let any incident BURN THE VILLAGE?
not a bad business move or a WORD FROM CRITICS
They hated on the album, but they wasn't READY FOR IT
Trinity, Detroit Deli....ima DEADLY POET:ufdup:
And i aint even get a quotable for WHAT IM SPITN
GUESS IT DEPENDS
on RECORD SPENDS

and how MUCH YOU SHIPPIN
to the MOM & POP, BEST BUYS & SAM GOODIES
when will the DRAMA STOP, and JUST WISE and HAND IT TO ME
for EVERY PERSON meant for GREAT THINGS GO THROUGH THIS
cuz HEAVY JERKIN is quick to SHAPE KINGS & MOLD RULERS:wow:



I'm getting mad love, I'm snuggling hugs
Druggling thugs, smuggling drugs, juggling jobs, guzzling jugs
So here's a toast to federal checks
Hetero sex, unaffordable medical debts, huh
We travel in packs and ravel in facts and gravel in cracks
To find babbling Max, gaffling tracks
I grapple an axe for them baffling acts
The mysterious stab in the backs who dabble in wax
Still in my yard when I sculpted the culprit
The tall shyt that will end up with his skull split
Then I buried the hatchet, I carried on my back
Butterfingers is here and it's necessary to scratch it
Baby all I wanna do is swallow one and two
Smoke a little bit and follow one of you
Back home when the party ends
So tonight I'm dropping naughty hints
To the finest women in the audience

that's child play compared to this

@PhonZhi

and every syllable ain't perfect homie alot of the syllables don't even rhyme homie.
 

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in a sort of unrelated note, people say it was Masta Ace, but I feel like it was ELZHI that Eminem stole his Slim Shady era delivery style from. Everybody who's heard Em's first "Infinite" album knows he didnt' sound like that at first.

But at the same time, I really don't know the time frame that El and Em both started rapping, or what Detroit's underground scene was like.

All I know is....



:sas2:


Em took from AZ and Masta Ace, not Elzhi homie.
 
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