Sadly, this is the only funny etherous post in 10 pages.
Even though I enter your threads for the fukkery, I watched the video twice and I will give you straight feedback:
1) the hook is a straight jack of that Big Boi kryptonite song/vid people posted. Same cadence as it and everything
2) your lyrics are fine for what they are
3) I can hear you went for the Royce 5'9 Fastlane type of flow, but it was poorly executed and the wrong type of beat for that
4) Your voice is the weakest thing holding you back. It's ur natural voice, I get it, but that means you can't fix it. If a person wants to sing but their singing voice is bad, they can't be a singer. Rap is similar
5) Never wear a wifebeater again until u spend months in the gym first...maybe years
To be fair, this isn't any better or worse than some of the garbage nobody rappers who have vids on MTVU or old BET latenight joints. If people come to see your shows, so be it.
I'd like to see a video of the people who came to just a C-Styles show though before I believe that