Can I get everybody's opinion on this blend I did?

[Buzzed Lightyear]

2Pac feat. Mary J. Blige - Dear Mama
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=168425&songID=12696499&showPlayer=true
It still has a few kinks that need to be worked out but I just wanted to know if there's anything else that needs to be done.

 

[Nomad1]

It's pretty good

 

[Buzzed Lightyear]

Thanx.