Can I get some opinions?

[Nobodyknows]

Can I get some opinions on this verse?

Try to excuse the poor quality of the mic

 

[Nobodyknows]

 

[TheRtist]

mods ban him

 

[Farrinto]

needs better rhyme schemes imo

 

[Jean Jacket]

It's wack man. Constructive criticism. You gotta Prazwel type vibe going on. Your energy is all over the place.

Develop a style and find a producer that you are friends with that won't lie to you and is actually hot.

If you make your own beats.............well... Keep practicing breh. Good luck.

 

[Shadow King]

Between the mic and your accent I don't know what you said

I'd have better judgment with a better mic but this sounds lIke it could be decent

 

[Nobodyknows]

Between the mic and your accent I don't know what you said

I'd have better judgment with a better mic but this sounds lIke it could be decent

Thanks breh. I've been working on my accent