Coli Soap Opera (could this writing excerise work in TLR) :

[BlackDiBiase]

https://www.thecoli.com/threads/let...off-everybody-add-on-writing-exercise.621902/

 

[BlackDiBiase]

(opening scene - 2 IR lovers on the run - sirens in the background) - coli lets do this!!

 

[10bandz]

10bandz: op is a fakkit

OP: no I’m not

*Dame enters the room and sites beside OP*

10bandz:

 

[BlackDiBiase]

10bandz: op is a fakkit

OP: no I’m not

*Dame enters the room and sites beside OP*

10bandz:

(cops in car chasing down IR couple - turn off radio rookie gay boy at the precinct )

C1 : Is this us now larry, now huh !? fcking baby sitting the sweet hearts !? got sweet hearts of my own larry !

C2 : fukk you up for, you heard cap. any nggas within proximity of a buxom damsel must be publicly flogged.

C1 : is this us huh larry !? from the academy to this

C2 : pull up left. (*grabs gun*) they went in there

C1 : did they just throw 10 bandz in the air or am i smoking insomania kush !!??

C2 : i saw it too.

 

[old pig]

10bandz: op is a fakkit

OP: no I’m not

*Dame enters the room and sites beside OP*

10bandz:

Without warning, a ninja then jumps thru an open window and proceeds to throw one star at the original poster before disappearing back into the night. He then briefly reappears to give Dame Dash a head nod and once again disappears back into the night.

 

[BlackDiBiase]

Without warning, a ninja then jumps thru an open window and proceeds to throw one star at the original poster before disappearing back into the night.

i respect this one star giver though, i will stick to the film room joint. shyt is piff.