Critique my song Y'all

[CapitalforCapital]

Lol i made two versions one without the autotune I was just testing the waters and liked this version a lil more

Keep the auto tune.

 

[Blankthawtz]

Don't ever waste my 0:40 seconds of time with this bullshyt ever again....

 

[Cleansprite]

Don't ever waste my 0:40 seconds of time with this bullshyt ever again....

Lmao chill bro

 

[Cleansprite]

Record this professionally and shoot a dope viral vid and you should be good money. That playful shyt is in right now.

Good looks G

 

[Cleansprite]

If you old don't drop y'all opinion this strictly 4 my young nikkaz

 

[Cleansprite]

Sprite - Make Moves(Prod. Dvtchie)

 

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