critique this beat for a free dap

[nastynaven]

FREE DAPS! even if you hate it:

 

[Citi Trends]

Cool

Now where's my dap

 

[nastynaven]

Cool

Now where's my dap

GOTCHA! enjoy your dap.

 

[Lootpack]

That silhouette creeped me out at first.

It's a solid beat all-around tho.

 

[nastynaven]

That silhouette creeped me out at first.

It's a solid beat all-around tho.

DAPPED

 

[Mr Rager]

Sounds like I'm playing a bad Super Nintendo game
Interesting beat though.

 

[cjlaw93]

Absolutely horrible.. But you got potential

 

[Address_Unknown]

"Needs more Cowbell."
Where's my dap?
Sidenote: " Ain't bad at all. What were you planning on doing with it? Sounds like something that would go perfectly with the main screen of an indie game."

 

[Orbital-Fetus]

 

[nastynaven]

"Needs more Cowbell."
Where's my dap?
Sidenote: " Ain't bad at all. What were you planning on doing with it? Sounds like something that would go perfectly with the main screen of an indie game."

im not gonna use it at all, im just gonna make a better one. i made that shyt in ten minutes.

 

[Mastamimd]

Nothing too bad. Better than I can do.

 

[nastynaven]

this is exhausting, dapping everyone. gotta do it though, im a man of my word.

 

[Sauce Dab]

Ehhhh didn't really like it but I've heard way worse. Who's your inspiration Rick Rubin?
That little beat change around 1:00 was tho. Try looping that little part and see what you can do with that.
Keep working breh and dap me

 

[Kwéyòl]

who is that in the background

 

[Tunez]

Absolutely horrible.

Fixed