critique this beat for a free dap

[nastynaven]

 

[nastynaven]

you tryana curse me breh

 

[nastynaven]

I see you are just starting out....keep it up....you will get better....beat was eh...from 1:30 to the end though was nice....work around that....

Gotcha DAPPED

 

[cyndaquil]

shyt is ass

 

[Mason83]

It was ok could use some mixing

 

[Mason83]

Dap

 

[ALonelyDad]

Sounds like some indie video game beat, not bad.

 

[nastynaven]

DAPS UPDATED

 

[LEEeveryday]

my old evil self appreciates the dark approach... I probably would've carved someones caracas out to this