Dope or Trash

[Kaypain]

My only attempt at rapping. Wrote the hook, made the beat, wrote my own verse.

 

[Poetical Poltergeist]

Props for posting a track.


shyt is copy cat radio drakish fakish type crap. But its a start keep grinding.

 

[smokeurobinson]

Its not trash....But then again I cant say its dope either. Its aight. Lyrics dont stand out in this oversaturated era....2nd rapper was the best rapper......The song sounds like something I'd hear during a Star Live and Direct commercial

 

[Matt504]

I'd add pitch correction to the notes and smooth out the vibrato a bit, the singer can actually sing.

 

[Kaypain]

Good looking in the constructive criticism. Did this shyt back in 2011 haven't done a song since. Thinking about making a little mixtape

 

[Kaypain]

Bump