Dropped my first video today

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other than that the video was cool a few mess ups...i actually edit videos if you need one done hmu
 
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1. the dark girl and struggle beard had matching gums.
2. you look like you have adhd and beg for newports
3. i didnt see not one ass shot, them girls had zero facials with zero hair and no ass???
4. you and your mans need to humble yourself with this fairytale rich life, especially with video evidence.
 

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honestly it's basically a carbon copy of what's out today... get some content in your music, the flow is not bad but at the same time, it's basically what many rappers of today do, copy what's hot and don't stand out for sh*t. Either way i rate this average.
 

mortuus est

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honestly it's basically a carbon copy of what's out today... get some content in your music, the flow is not bad but at the same time, it's basically what many rappers of today do, copy what's hot and don't stand out for sh*t. Either way i rate this average.

get 'em
 

LauderdaleBoss

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The song is aight, but the video did it no favors.

Both chicks could have played up their sexiness a bit more. Dark skin shorty looked so outta place with the way she was acting. It's like she was struggling to stay interested or something.
 

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Others have already given you an objective critique of the video (fvck the straight up haters) so no need for me to reiterate @Carr. Decent effort, I'm sure your future efforts will be better tho.
 

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honestly it's basically a carbon copy of what's out today... get some content in your music, the flow is not bad but at the same time, it's basically what many rappers of today do, copy what's hot and don't stand out for sh*t. Either way i rate this average.

...any advice from you is :childplease: status














the nerve of this guy :comeon:










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J.Carr >>>>>>>>>> C-Styles
 
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