Dropping some Examples :

[BlackDiBiase]

I tried something a little different, I got beats who ever want to spit whoever want to comment, holla.

[ame=http://youtu.be/p7F5ype7PyI]Camron - Bruce Lee - YouTube[/ame]

Camron - Bruce Lee ft. Whitney Houston

 

[BlackDiBiase]

How you edit thread titles, smh.

 

[Mr. Leonidas]

The loop is too repetitive. It could benefit from some additional instrumentation. The percussion is pretty basic. It needs more depth. The vocals arent synced up with the beat so the track doesnt sound polished.