feedback on my rhyme tutorial i just made

[the cac mamba]

Son why you got 5 different facebook accounts?

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we know why ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^


Ronnie Enclade | Facebook

looks like he refuses to conform on facebook too

 

[Juggalo Fred]

Necro is the king of multis

 

[OnlyInCalifornia]

we know why ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^


Ronnie Enclade | Facebook

looks like he refuses to conform on facebook too

LOL.

i hate when u talking to a girl and u like them and they say they don't want to be in a relationship with anybody because they scared of getting " hurt or some bullshyt then all of a sudden they go get a boyfriend.

if u feeling somebody just say that then smh

Maybe don't scare them away talking about multis on the phone for hours breh?

 

[( ິΦᆺΦ)ິ°˚(✿ *҉ manko｡✧)]

internet bullying

 

[Lifer11]

Can't read the white font against the album cover backgrounds. And instead of just writing about it and including pictures of artists you should have included examples of those artists using multis. No half stepping man, if you're gona make a video it should be with the intention of being seen, and this doesn't bring enough to the table, nor is it entertaining enough for anyone outside of here to watch it.

So in summation, change the font color, leave the instructions up there longer, use "than" in place of "then" in the proper places in here, no hate intended in the least bit and seriously that's a small thing but people won't take you serious on a tutorial breaking down advanced rhyme schemes if you don't have a basic understanding of the English language, and include examples of Pun, Big L, and several other artists actually using multis.

 

[HustlerOfVirginiA]

Rhyme King reading this thread like

 

[TrifeGod]

This dude still exist?

 

[Cole Cash]

11:51] juelzenclade20: my mom live wit me but i got the whole basement 2 myself wit my own door.
[11:51] juelzenclade20: im 17
[11:51] cllmemayb14: awesomeness!!
[11:51] cllmemayb14: we can go there after the movies
[11:51] juelzenclade20: ok
[11:52] cllmemayb14: ahahaha sike u fukkin pervert im exposin you to everybody on all the messageboards ronnie u fukkin molester ahaha
[11:52] cllmemayb14: coli, sohh, rapmusic allhiphop and boxden u fakkit
[11:52] cllmemayb14: retarded pervert
[11:57] juelzenclade20: please dont i wus just jokin i knew that wasnt a girl

neg ratio so high, had to post that shyt twice! :stickyfingaz:

 

[Reebok Jones]

That was the most pathetic example of a tutorial I've ever seen. Even the song you used didn't have rhymes until the very end... and the rhymes weren't even multis... How can you show five lines of white text over an album with a lot of white in it, and then only show it for 5 seconds.

 

[pointproven214]

That was the most pathetic example of a tutorial I've ever seen. Even the song you used didn't have rhymes until the very end... and the rhymes weren't even multis... How can you show five lines of white text over an album with a lot of white in it, and then only show it for 5 seconds.

1st off the rhymes did have multis in it residence dead presidents 2 and last but not least who wants to look at a text for the entire video.

 

[Deltron]

least who wants to look at a text for the entire video.

yet your entire video is fukking text.

 

[Reebok Jones]

1st off the rhymes did have multis in it residence dead presidents 2 and last but not least who wants to look at a text for the entire video.

Yo do you even understand what tutorial means? Do you know that word?

 

[the cac mamba]

internet bullying

you cant 'bully' someone who trolls the forum and calls people dumbasses

 

[Yoda]

you cant 'bully' someone who trolls the forum and calls people dumbasses

in all reality, what if op has down syndrome or somethin? would we calm down with the bullying?

well



till then....


HA Got em, again


callmemayb14 : sup?
rhymeking - who is this? is this a joke again?
callmemayb14: no silly im sorry my brother took the computer from me last time im sorry
rhymeking- its ok
callmemayb14 - soooo..... lets talk about rhymes and schemes lol
rhymeking - ok give me your number so we can exchange pictures
callmemayb14 - ok lol, but first break down some eminem pls
rhymeking - you in arlington? my dad has alot of condoms i can borrow
callmemayb14 - wow, you sound like you like me awwww
rhymeking - ill put a sock in my basement door so my dad wont bother us
callmemayb14 - ok. how big are you?
rhymeing - promise you wont tell
callmemayb14 - of course
therhymeking - about 3 but i think its because i drink alot of dr pepper
callmemayb14 - its ok, as long as its fun right?
rhymeking - are you really 14?
callmemayb14 - 14 and a half
rhymeking - my weiner will look so big for a 14 year old
callmemayb14 - SIKE, YOU FUKK BOI, THIS YODA FROM THE COLI, IM AH EXPOSE YOU FOR THE CREEP U IS!!! IDIOT !! HA , GOT EM
rhymeking - i was just playing too,lol i knew you werent girl
callmemayb14 - suck a dykk pedo

 

[BlackDiBiase]

in all reality, what if op has down syndrome or somethin? would we calm down with the bullying?

well



till then....


HA Got em, again


callmemayb14 : sup?
rhymeking - who is this? is this a joke again?
callmemayb14: no silly im sorry my brother took the computer from me last time im sorry
rhymeking- its ok
callmemayb14 - soooo..... lets talk about rhymes and schemes lol
rhymeking - ok give me your number so we can exchange pictures
callmemayb14 - ok lol, but first break down some eminem pls
rhymeking - you in arlington? my dad has alot of condoms i can borrow
callmemayb14 - wow, you sound like you like me awwww
rhymeking - ill put a sock in my basement door so my dad wont bother us
callmemayb14 - ok. how big are you?
rhymeing - promise you wont tell
callmemayb14 - of course
therhymeking - about 3 but i think its because i drink alot of dr pepper
callmemayb14 - its ok, as long as its fun right?
rhymeking - are you really 14?
callmemayb14 - 14 and a half
rhymeking - my weiner will look so big for a 14 year old
callmemayb14 - SIKE, YOU FUKK BOI, THIS YODA FROM THE COLI, IM AH EXPOSE YOU FOR THE CREEP U IS!!! IDIOT !! HA , GOT EM
rhymeking - i was just playing too,lol i knew you werent girl
callmemayb14 - suck a dykk pedo

so let me get this right you played mrs.doubtfire to expose some one with "down syndrome" for messageboard props.